Not Ready For Take Off.

Not Ready For Take Off.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Lonely I stand

Nowhere to go

Packed bags, yet not ready for take off

Watching planes draw white lines across the sky

No rush

No want

No need to look back

Yet as I remember the glint in your eyes

A bomb drops; ruining my life

As I close my eyes; I see it all

The memories comes back

Haunting me, feels like you’ll walk up to me anytime

Feeling you arms around my waist

Feeling your lips’ structure against mine

Wanting you to know how I feel

Wanting to shove it down your throat.



Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 2nd Of June.

Dedication: You know whom you are.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinino As Always~

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Boy do I relate to this! Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


You write the most beautiful dedications I swear!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The imagery is outstanding.
"A bomb drops; ruining my life

As I close my eyes; I see it all

The memories comes back

Haunting me, feels like you’ll walk up to me anytime"

This caught my attention when I continued reading it because you make it seems as if the bomb is another persona, pushing you to move forward.

Posted 11 Years Ago


sad poem but well written, I love it!!!!!! ^^,

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it. love the emotion and the imagery. it's a bit sad in a way. great write! ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very vivid description. Really pulled on the heart strings. Great Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


So romantic. Loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is a delicate, romantic poem.
yoursJVL

Posted 11 Years Ago


deep. Very emotional. Love it(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well, i don't get the connection between the journey that never was and the subject of the poem , point is, they aren't closely related. The bridge between the journey and cause of the journey is not clear.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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