Not Ready For Take Off.

Not Ready For Take Off.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.



Lonely I stand

Nowhere to go

Packed bags, yet not ready for take off

Watching planes draw white lines across the sky

No rush

No want

No need to look back

Yet as I remember the glint in your eyes

A bomb drops; ruining my life

As I close my eyes; I see it all

The memories comes back

Haunting me, feels like you’ll walk up to me anytime

Feeling you arms around my waist

Feeling your lips’ structure against mine

Wanting you to know how I feel

Wanting to shove it down your throat.

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 2nd Of June.

Dedication: You know whom you are.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.

Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinino As Always~

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I like the poem. Honest and strong words in the poem.
"Watching planes draw white lines across the sky
No rush
No want
No need to look back"
Last line made the poem complete. Thank you for a outstanding poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Great metaphors for life and its trials. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Very nice! I like it! I enjoyed the imagery as well. =D

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was really good, I loved the imagery.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 11 Years Ago

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