Blood Strewn Across The Walls.

Blood Strewn Across The Walls.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Too many thought

Too many feelings

Too much pressure;

Never been a kid, really.

 

 

Never really made a stand

Always alone

Everyone seem to avoid me

What have I done to you?

 

 

Mind aches

Feeling my heart slow down

Heart sliced out as a throat of a slaughtered lamb

Blood strewn across the walls.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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Strong words made the poem a pleasure to read. I like the strong statements and the powerful ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very intense but well done. Keep on penning.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Intense and packed with raw emotions, excellent write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago


From the title you had me already caught in the emotion of the piece. Each line opened more of the vein you were bleeding from...very strong, with a connection that comes out of lost youthfulness. Having to mature fast and wondering why that seems strange to some, and part of the sceme for you... =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Intense poetry, full of raw emotions. Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful poem. Keep writing! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


In not making a stand we lose the sense of engagement to others. In getting along with others, they would expect that we are forming a tie that binds. You are obviously keeping yourself free and unattached in relationships.

Posted 8 Years Ago


short but very stronge and powerful. Deep emotions. Vert nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked the honesty in this write. You hold nothing back, and that make for a great read. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem was very vivid, raw, and beautifully written. It was quite short but the poem was able to express so much emotion. Your always poems always amaze me!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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