You're Not Worth My Tears.

I can't believe

I cut myself for you back then

A boy like you

Doesn't deserve my tears; nor my blood

Hang me by the neck

Cut my throat

I rather wanna die;

Than being with you.

 

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 12th of September.

Dedication: I bet you know whom you are.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Quite powerful lines.

"Doesnt deserve my tears nor my blood" this line says so much, theres an awareness that one realizes they are more worthy than the way they have been treated by another. Took me almost 35 years to figure that one. Good job.

[Thea]

"A boy like you
Doesn't deserve my tears; nor my blood"
Whoa, easy...Don't ever do things like that when the person you're talking about doesn't even deserve a tear from you... :)))
Can feel the anger here...Love it... :)))

[Chiara]

Exactly how I feel right now. Good work.

[FallenHeroXx]

Assuming i really do know whom this is about..
Then it's a sudden dump on a chest..
But a good emotional write.
Good job

[Sleeping Maiden]

Quite deep! I love it! It's short but has a powerful impact in it. You sure know how to say your pain very well. Great write girl!

[Dayran]

' If you can face triumph and disaster and view both imposters as the same, then you are a man.' - Rudyard Kipling

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Powerful and honest piece...has a breakthrough element to it, great :)