Not An Option For Me.

Not An Option For Me.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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 Sometimes I wish I could disappear

Just like most people do

After all I can see
It isn't an option for me

So I'll walk away

Won't look back

This is where I will slay

All of the black.



© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


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A Risen Heroine.
Honest Opinion As Always :)
Ignore Grammar Problems xD

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I agree with the below comment, you do say so much in so few words. Short and sweet. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You say so much in so few words. Well penned! Keep up the great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is simple and elegant in the speaker's desire to "slay all of the black". The last lines completely make the poem. I would be remiss, however, if I failed to mention that the first line is too long and detracts/distracts from the core poem. It's too bulky. Read it aloud and you'll see what I am talking about. It kinda made me not want to give the rest of your poem a chance. But that's just me. After the line, the poem flows realy well and vocalizes well. Just my humble opinion. Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really great it is strong and full of great emotion. I really enjoyed this great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Powerful and wonderful, So beuatiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I believe ordinary people only pretend to go somewhere we can't find. The truth is we, as poets, know exactly how to escape....with our pen in hand! Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


We all want to disappear at some point of our lives, questioning our existence, our purpose and the reason why we have to tackle so many obstacles in a single day, repeatedly. But that is life, and remains so.

Well penned. Short and simple.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I begin my life four time. I sold all I could and left everything and begin a new life. Sometime I did well. I like the desire of this poem. You can disappear in a sense one day. Many options in a life. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was so sweet
i love that :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


An encounter with the vicinity of the void. Its a situation where ' less is more.' Your passions are as important as your mind. ' Be still and ye shall know.'

Posted 12 Years Ago



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