Ding Dong

Ding Dong

A Poem by Pestonjee

Now that the

witch is dead

Freedom reigns in Oz

And words

No longer shake

In fear at the brutality

of all she was


© 2020 Pestonjee


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Thank you for unblocking me. I definitely see a connection between your decision to block/unblock me & your intent in writing this poem. I'm sorry you perceived she and me as somehow being in wicked cahoots, but I'm old & forgetful so this whole misunderstanding will be a fart in the wind in five minutes. Despite being blocked by you, I'm able to see that your reviewing is fair-minded & that's why I'm puzzled you are still grinding on this enuf to post a poem about it. You drove her off. You did it single-handedly & I hope you're proud of yourself now for "cleaning up" the cafe! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Welcome to my page Ms. Barley 🤗 I'm absolutely thrilled to see you on here. It'd be really nice t.. read more



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Thank you for unblocking me. I definitely see a connection between your decision to block/unblock me & your intent in writing this poem. I'm sorry you perceived she and me as somehow being in wicked cahoots, but I'm old & forgetful so this whole misunderstanding will be a fart in the wind in five minutes. Despite being blocked by you, I'm able to see that your reviewing is fair-minded & that's why I'm puzzled you are still grinding on this enuf to post a poem about it. You drove her off. You did it single-handedly & I hope you're proud of yourself now for "cleaning up" the cafe! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Welcome to my page Ms. Barley 🤗 I'm absolutely thrilled to see you on here. It'd be really nice t.. read more
Its funny this poem should feel good at the end but I am left thinking of all the crap freedom makes allowance for and of all the things that the witch was blamed for but was really the actions of others using her guise as the scapegoat:/

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Indeed, the burn witch mentality has never really left the human society. I do agree, the blame is .. read more
Oz is now fear-free.
Next, we should be about getting rid of the wicked witches in reality.
Our world hardly needs more fear.
Perceptive poem, P!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Amen to that sir. Thanks a ton!


The bells.. the bells he cries .. and then pon deaf or dying ears he sighs .. the fools they think I'm done with them.... surprise.. surprise..

Posted 1 Month Ago


Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Hahaha! Loved your take on it sir. Thanks a ton!
Neville

1 Month Ago


You are mot welcome ..
Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Take care and stay safe friend 🤗


Posted 1 Month Ago


Brief and to the point but.. which point I wonder? Could be of a person.. a thought.. a dilemma.. even the virus hanging onto our shirt tails. What or whichever it sits waiting for yet more research,, you have a way of 'speaking' as if setting readers a project or homework! So, for now,, will think about this one and get back to you!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Do please get back to me...it takes me much work to write a poem open to various interpretations. Th.. read more
Sort of wishing this was the death of the virus, but when you see the word witch in a poem it usually suggests a woman of wrath, and since it's not my ex it must be yours. Sadly missed I assume was not on the headstone.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

The virus is not very different from my ex. In fact it seems slightly innocent by comparison. Thanks.. read more
Don't know what to make of this one. Superficially, it seems like a simple, if mysterious statement. Is there an allegory here? If so, what is really being stated about whom? Or am I just reading too much into it?

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Thanks for asking...no one else did. It’s personal...death of a love. A b***h of an ex. Yet, In th.. read more
I am looking forward to this...lol. I like your line of thinking.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much for such an expression of interest 🤗
Interesting poem. Has a nice ring to it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much, my friend 🤗

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