A Knight of Lust

A Knight of Lust

A Poem by AJNJ
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A tale of vengeful lust ;)

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Once a chivalry-filled knight
Went on a journey in rage
Tearing through a passage
Dark, slippery and tight
To shackle and mount a thief
Of hearts and of sanity
Who, with her firm, ruby lips
Caught many noblemen
In her vile, arousing grip
Alas! In a mad lunar burst
of wild and beastly lust
He dipped his regal sword
In her bloodied scabbard 
All thoughts of warfare
In the locked, jousting pair
Were lost in frenzied and 
Crazed, euphoric thrusts 

© 2020 AJNJ


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AJNJ
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these ten word challenges are something else PJ ... as is your latest offering ... which will undoubtedly appeal to all dragon slayers, masochists and lovers of tasteful erotica wherever they might be .. I liked it too by the way........................ N :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

These challenges make my weekend more interesting. Now my friend demanded a medieval theme to go wi.. read more
Neville

2 Months Ago


.. always a pleasure ...



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This reads a bit misogynistic but okay as its wordplay only

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

You gave it a new angle 😳🥴 thanks anyway
Tania Mo

2 Months Ago

I'm OK with chains and belts sumtimes
I really loved the way you have mingled lust and battle efortlessly .It gives the reader a lot of imagination scope XD.
well penned ,mate:)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

You too. Have a rollicking one 😁
Ankita Dwivedi

2 Months Ago

U are witty, aren't you?i will sure. And will still review your work. :))
AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks 😊 I'll be keeping tabs too
Oh my, you certainly wrote an erotic one using all the words in the challenge! Well done! Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks a ton for appreciating this poem, Ms. Lydi :)
Yellow yellow, Pestonjee is a dirty fellow! I told you not to send RRs for ribald poetry. Great word usage. Filthy mind. HeeHee.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

I AM a dirty fellow
Ditzy Kat Hello!

You know I'll take that as a compliment... read more
Ew! Why did you have to refer to her scabbard as 'bloodied"? I'm down with a thinly-veiled metaphor of a poem, and this is a good one, but that one word made it gross for me. Other than that, I enjoyed several of your other turns of phrase, it reads smoothly and easily, and ends with "euphoric thrusts". I generally like anything that ends in euphoric thrusts.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

I'm sorry I offended your finger senses. Sometimes I get carried away with all the blood and gore :).. read more
nicely done and challenge accepted... your gauntlet was thrown

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks a ton for appreciating this poem, dear sir. :)
you are good with these challenges...
and this is such a passionate battle...as they both leave the field spent, and smiling...even
if their lust has bloodied the grounds.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot sir. I enjoy creating these poems.
Extremely naughty, Pestonjee, but at the same time very well imagined. You execute your ten word challenges wonderfully well. I like your tale contained here. Not all Knight's get that lucky and at least this one was chivalrous! A great title selected, too. You are very good at completing these ten word tasks!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks a ton. Ms. Inessa! I'm flying high after this review!
Another ten word challenge.....and another one successfully attempted. You are always given a difficult set of words and manage to arrange them very creatively in always originally themed poetry. The play on the words in the title is quite brilliant and the following tale about a chivalric Knight out to slay a beast yet succumbing to her feminine wiles is timeless and worthy of a Hollywood script. Add some song and dance and it's a Bollywood script, too! It's a very sensual and erotic read with just the right amount of detail and naughtiness. Another fine effort, Pestonjee. You have mastered the ten word challenge.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

My friend wanted the setting to be medieval so I tried to give it that touch. Thanks, dear Brilliant.. read more
Really rocking these challenges. This is both violent and seductive.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AJNJ

2 Months Ago

Thanks a ton, Ms. Ana! :)

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