Say No To The Moon!

Say No To The Moon!

A Poem by AJNJ
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Its not all pretty

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Mistress of guile
Dark side concealed
With deft sorcery
Deceptive her
'Sea of Tranquility'
With malice
she spawns subterfuge
in moonstruck hearts
Driving lovers to
the edges of sheer lunacy
Serenading the wolves
till they howl for her
with eerie lust
feeding her vainglory
With spite
she evokes tempests
in earthly seas
With treachery
she waxes and wanes
her gibbous face
an ode to occult
and aced witchery
Stop singing paeans
to the moon
She is but a piece
of pure, celestial devilry

© 2020 AJNJ


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Hi AJNJ! I just thought this poem very different from most other poetry I have read on the moon. Its definitely not conventional to say the least. And a reader like me would term it fascinating. In literature worldwide,the moon has come to symbolize everything pious and nice and definitely beautiful. Read any classic poetry and you'll find oodles of evidence to the general poetic approach. I, personally, do not recall any masterpieces to the contrary. So your slashing the pristine image to bits here comes as a bit of shock and teeny weeny dismay but it doesn't distract from this poems uniqueness and entertainment value. I'd say,come on, we need a different viewpoint, something not so run-of-the-mill. And this poetry is a fine example of that. So overall I felt happy reading something new. Keep giving us different poetry. Thank you.

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AJNJ

1 Month Ago

Hi Ms. Sabrina! If we write poetry, our poetry should be as unique as our fingerprint. Whats the poi.. read more



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Hello to my favorite guy on here. Trust you to rebel against the order. You always try to swim against the trend. I hope you don't drown one day. Anyway, this is good. Meow.❤

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AJNJ

1 Month Ago

Thanks a ton Ms. Kat. You're loved whether you bless or curse me. If I drown, I'll take you down wit.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Month Ago

I have nine lives remember.
Keep writing for now.
Ooo love this love this.Its appealing to the rebel in me.Cool poem.I hate the moon toooo lol

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AJNJ

1 Month Ago

Thank a ton Ms. Tania. I hate being stereotyped. I must get to your poems soon. Sorry wasn't around... read more

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Call me AJ! I love to post a good poem every now and then. The love I receive is always returned in kind. Though I'm a pest sometimes 😁.... more..

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