Owe you thee IMAGINATION!

Its been years,
but nothing could change my fate
I kept blaming,
but hoped secretly that someone would save.

Stood in front of mirrors,
figuring the right and wrong
but when i closed my eyes,
the world was bright and exempted from thorns!


I love the time of the day when i see things which are not real
cause reality strikes hard like liege captured in prison.
I feel free, I breath free,I see and think free
when a creation of God,rather a boon of lord bestows on me.


Imagination! what to call this magnificent purple attired angel
pulls me out of pain heals me from the wounds
keeps me alive,shows me what is life.
sees no end,oh! you unbounded aura!
I owe thee for my survival.

You made my tears and even turned them into giggles.
You even let me have some people who existed never
They call you my hobby and call me creative
but i honor thee as a piece of my life
a tiny one but whose absence will take away the peace of my life!

Reviews

[Azriel]

lovely piece, starts off sort of bleak almost hopeless, but as the poem and story progresses, so much hope enters the scene. lovely use of imagery here, really loved this piece overall, also really loved this line "
cause reality strikes hard like liege captured in prison."

[Anushka Saha]

thanku so much i really appreciate...

[gloria]

this poem was well written with many good examples of inner human emotions I can tell you spent your time choosing the right emotions to poor in the poem throw your words the feel of the poem is well understood an it was easy to grasp what to ment

[Rishabh Shaw]

you've a mind of a poet because you dont write to fill in words you write because you have a reason.. a reason which makes your poetry alive and speaking... i like your style of writing,..

[Anushka Saha]

thanQ so much!

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Each line speaks eloquently.

[Anushka Saha]

thank u so much sir!
this is my 1st poems 1st review!
i really appreciate tat u liked it...

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Nuss :)
I must appreciate your great efforts for presenting us such a lovely piece.
I have immensely enjoyed the piece.
I hope you will create more great pieces through your imagination and passion :)

[Anushka Saha]

sure i wll!

[zainul]

Wish you good luck :)