MY WRISTWATCH -AR

A love story about wristwatch and a person. Must read before judging . Poem more of emotions.

                                                               MY WRISTWATCH

                                                                                                                                                 -AR

NOT A PERSON WHO BELIEVES IN LOVE,

NO,NOT AT ANY SITES,

BUT AT ONE NIGHT,

IN A BEAUTIFUL FARE, 

I MET YOU,

HAVING THE SHINES OF THE WHOLE UNIVERSE,

WITH PERFECT EDGES AND CURVES,

IN A STACK OF THOUSANDS,

ONLY YOU COULD CATCH ME,

NO MATTER THE VALUE YOU HAD,

NEITHER HIGH OR LOW

AS MANY,WEREN'T SKILLED TO VALUE YOU,

AS THE VALUE OF YOU I CAME ACROSS TO,

FROM THAT DAY

YOU VERY RESPONSIBLY JEWEL MY LOOKS,

CAN'T EVEN REMEMBER YOU TOOK A DAY OFF

AT FORMALS AS WELL AS INFORMAL,

YOU JUST GLOSSED AT ANY PART,

STILL REMEMBER THE WAY YOUR BAND      

GENTLY SUPPRESSES MY SKIN,

AT STARTING HARSH,

AT END SOFT, 

THOUGH WITH ALL OF THE PROMISES OF BEING TOGETHER, 

AND ACCEPTING MY CARELESSNESS,

TO BE MY MAJOR GUILT,

YOU LEFT;

CAN'T SAY I NEVER TRIED,

AS I STILL NOT REMEMBER ANY STORE IN ANY UNIVERSE TO MAKE YOU AS YOU WERE,

I TRIED. 

YES I TRIED.

BUT ONCE YOU STRAPPED AWAY NEVER CAME BACK,

NOT HAVING ANY GRUDGES OR GUILT ANYMORE,

I WOULD JUST SAY THANK YOU!  :-)  

Author's Note

THIS POEM IS MORE OF EMOTIONS AND LESS OF IT'S STRUCTURE. PLEASE READ IT SLOW.

Reviews

[Lathen Griffiths]

A unique write here Abhipreet, very original and a lot of descriptions contained within, lines such as. ‘ STILL REMEMBER THE WAY YOUR BAND
GENTLY SUPPRESSES MY SKIN,
AT STARTING HARSH,
AT END SOFT’, show the amount of thought you’ve put into this.

Lathen