Watching Green

Watching Green

A Poem by Phantom Heart

 

Green is dancing in the trees
It laughs in the sunlight
Growing toward the heavens
Trying to touch the clouds
No two have ever been the same
All green is unique
 
Green is always around,
In the yard and on for infinity
Out racing the wind
It sways with playful grace
And tickles the skin
When you lay on it
 
Green livens the spirit
Making the world a better place
Every time we take a break and
Start watching green.

© 2009 Phantom Heart


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simply beautiful, yet inspiring.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Posted 12 Years Ago


Being a poet has nothing to do with having a Ph.D. in literature. Yes, there is a technique to it... there's even a poetic language. But the good thing about poetry is that it's subjective; like any other art form. What we all consider poetry is in fact relative. You don't have to follow a gazillion rules to create a masterpiece. :) Anywho, this piece was absolutly brillant. The word choice was perfect! It flowed very well.Please do not change a thing about this poem. I enjoyed reading it. Kudos.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Colorful for sure. I will take better notice of the different greens today!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this piece. There was absolutely no awkwardness in it at all, and the imagery you evoked is pure and glorious. Very well done.

Thanks for sharing!

Best,
Raven

Posted 12 Years Ago


What beautiful descriptions.
Fresh life!
It was a good little read.


Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved that so much. It was amazing and beautiful. Green is the best color in the world and it would be hard for someone to disagree after reading that wonderful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice, especially with springtime on the horizon.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Coal City, IL



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