Lost In a World of Strangers

Lost In a World of Strangers

A Poem by Phantom Heart


I'm lost in a world of strangers
Pretending to be someone I'm not
My mind travels the forgotten
No one follows, no one cares
Who will save me from my path of destruction?
Who will end this suicidal reign?
Death walks beside me
Following forbidden paths
I look up at the light,
Do I want to be saved?
I don’t know the answer
And the skies are quiet
I continue down my path,
With death walking beside me

© 2009 Phantom Heart

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Posted 13 Years Ago

Well said and to the point.
You write well in such a few words.
You get to the point, like that.

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Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 20, 2009
Last Updated on May 24, 2009
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Phantom Heart
Phantom Heart

Coal City, IL

I really would like to become a better writer in order to express myself clearly. I am looking for lots of constructive criticism. I haven�t had anyone teach me how to write, so I have jus.. more..