Bloody Snow

Bloody Snow

A Poem by Abdur Raqeeb
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You can take this to describe a number of things; whatever it means in your head. For me, it reminded me of the time the Germans were fighting against the Russians in the snow in WW2.

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As the brilliant
snow drops pristine flakes gently
Red smears across white.

© 2012 Abdur Raqeeb


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Abdur Raqeeb
Please have your say on the above haiku. I will appreciate anyone who will suggest me how to improve my writing.

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This is really pretty, and the colour imagery is brilliant.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your views.
We can take this great write as the blood spills from wars on the pristine snow which denotes purity of hearts. A war of aggresion against the innocents.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

I really feel sorry for the innocent civilians who died during the world wars. Thank you for your re.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

I agree . You are welcome.

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Abdur Raqeeb
Abdur Raqeeb

United Arab Emirates



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I am from India. I am currently living in the UAE. Through this platform, I would like to develop my writing skills. more..

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