Drops of Life!

Drops of Life!

A Poem by Abdur Raqeeb
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Rain....

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The drops of water
Cascading from the heavens
Refreshed the dry earth

© 2012 Abdur Raqeeb


Author's Note

Abdur Raqeeb
I have always had a fascination for rain. Just thought to make a Haiku on it. Please leave your thoughts below. Honest criticism will be appreciated.

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You wrote a fine Haiku here. You wrote about weather and tied the first line to the last. Also, because of the short nature of the poetry, there is so much room left for the mind to expand beyond the text. That is the beauty of Haiku.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your views.
This is simple yet very nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your views.
dunnia

8 Years Ago

:)
Great lines!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the compliments.
Muhammad Qasim

8 Years Ago

My pleasure
Beautiful, it paints a picture in my mind of green springing forth as the water touches the parched land.

Good job. :)

~XYZ

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

I was thinking about that rainy ride last year and just made something on it. Anyway, thank you for .. read more
The XYZ Writer

8 Years Ago

Haha, you mean the elephant one? Half the time in the bus, it was also raining outside. :)
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Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Yup! Those were by far the best holidays I ever had.
i'm fond of such short verses ..
i somehow couldn't have made them up so well as you have done it here even if i tried my best ...
short and sweet ... and quenches the thirst ..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your views.
Ahh! So very refreshing ! Great work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ahh! So very refreshing ! Great work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ahh! So very refreshing ! Great work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love rain too and the imagery you used here in short lines.
Well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdur Raqeeb

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Salam

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Added on November 13, 2012
Last Updated on November 22, 2012
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Abdur Raqeeb
Abdur Raqeeb

United Arab Emirates



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I am from India. I am currently living in the UAE. Through this platform, I would like to develop my writing skills. more..

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