Drops of Life!

Rain....

The drops of water

Cascading from the heavens

Refreshed the dry earth

Author's Note

I have always had a fascination for rain. Just thought to make a Haiku on it. Please leave your thoughts below. Honest criticism will be appreciated.

Reviews

[David Scott]

You wrote a fine Haiku here. You wrote about weather and tied the first line to the last. Also, because of the short nature of the poetry, there is so much room left for the mind to expand beyond the text. That is the beauty of Haiku.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Appreciate your views.

[dunnia]

This is simple yet very nice

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Appreciate your views.

[dunnia]

:)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Great lines!

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Thank you for the compliments.

[Muhammad Qasim]

My pleasure

[The XYZ Writer]

Beautiful, it paints a picture in my mind of green springing forth as the water touches the parched land.

Good job. :)

~XYZ

[Abdur Raqeeb]

I was thinking about that rainy ride last year and just made something on it. Anyway, thank you for your review.

[The XYZ Writer]

Haha, you mean the elephant one? Half the time in the bus, it was also raining outside. :)
read moreHaha, you mean the elephant one? Half the time in the bus, it was also raining outside. :)

Your welcome.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Yup! Those were by far the best holidays I ever had.

[Hamza]

i'm fond of such short verses ..
i somehow couldn't have made them up so well as you have done it here even if i tried my best ...
short and sweet ... and quenches the thirst ..

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Appreciate your views.

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Ahh! So very refreshing ! Great work :)

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Ahh! So very refreshing ! Great work :)

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Ahh! So very refreshing ! Great work :)

[Sami Khalil]

I love rain too and the imagery you used here in short lines.
Well penned.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Thank you for your review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.
Salam