Transience

Transience

A Poem by Abraham Patrick
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A reflection on a scene while on a walk.

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As I waded briskly in morning’s serenity -

the tarred road on my right looking gritty

on my left, hedged plants sloping mild

towards the parched river bed grown all wild -

I spied a lively robin on a furrowed soil crest

its twitter rising from its quivering breast

as it twitched its reddish-brown tail in zest

calling to its mate perhaps to roost and nest.

 

I tried to stifle and smother my sneeze

lest terrified, it would flee or freeze.

I snuffed my sneeze in the nick of time.

It continued its merry cacophonous rime.

Soon I passed by it and from my sight gone

but the chatter in my head twittered on:

 

A fragile blithe blob of flesh and blood

a teeny lease of life in its body floods

snuffed finally by a vicious predator

or an invisible viral terminator

or old age wrestling it to death.

 

Lucky robin!

No unbridled thoughts in your head running rife

no strangulating coiling memory maze to fife

just a few instinctual ones of your nest,

your chicks, your haunts of food and rest.

No draining emotions and moping fettering feelings

a fleeting life lived purely by nature’s coded instincts.

© 2022 Abraham Patrick


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An interesting poem. Perhaps we do live much more complicated lives than robins and other creatures. They all help make up the rich tapestry of creation, and are probably just as important to the overall balance of nature as we are. I love a pleasant walk myself, taking in birdsong and the beauty of trees. We all share a wonderful planet!

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Thanks Robert for reading the poem and for your feedback and for the optimism. Yes, creation is beautiful. I wish we could live simpler lives and stop complicating them.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An interesting poem. Perhaps we do live much more complicated lives than robins and other creatures. They all help make up the rich tapestry of creation, and are probably just as important to the overall balance of nature as we are. I love a pleasant walk myself, taking in birdsong and the beauty of trees. We all share a wonderful planet!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 13, 2022
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Abraham Patrick
Abraham Patrick

Chennai, TN, India



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An English teacher trying my hand at poems as a way of expressing my experiences, feelings and thoughts. more..

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