Pleasant Weather

Today Weather is so pretty.

How nice is this weather

as the sun is coming

my heart with the sweet sounds of birds

greatly affected

I feel like I can't do anything today

And just sit throughout the day and enjoy this pleasant moment

Today I feel like eating pakoras and if I get tea with it then it will be more fun.

It is only sad moment that if i had spent this time with my loved one, then it would have been a different matter.

I miss her so much now

I don't know how she will be and what she will be doing

I wish she was with me and I would talk to her

Author's Note

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Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

Beauty shared is beauty multiplied. But one the one we live is far away, even the most breathtaking sunset can seem colorless. Well written, my friend.

[Abhishek]

Thank you so much

[Soren]

Missing someone is always difficult. It is contrasted with the positive feeling of pleasant weather. This is a nice contrast and balance. It is downbeat because it ends of the feeling of missing. This is sad which is probably what you intended.

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for appreciating me😀😊😁

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is ever so lovely, and emotional as well

[Abhishek]

Thank you for reviewing😍

[Sami Khalil]

In this lovely poem, you are combining the pleasant weather with romance. Very fitting sir and right on the money.

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for keeping your beautiful thoughts on this poem

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time. See you around. Keep posting.

[Sami Khalil]

"I miss her so much now
I don't know how she will be and what she will be doing
I wish she was with me and I would talk to her"

[Sami Khalil]

"my heart with the sweet sounds of birds
greatly affected
I feel like I can't do anything today"

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Beautiful weather tends to put our minds at ease and in a dream state. It calms our souls into revelry and peace. And it is that place where we yearn for love more. Very nice poem thank you for sharing your work with us.

[Abhishek]

Thanks for reviewing this poem

[Betty Hermelee]

nice moment of enjoyment in eating Pakoras, but it would be much better with your love around.
very nice. I would suggest using less words and more imagery, but keep it up, it's good.
Best, Betty

[Abhishek]

Thanks a lot for such a nice Review

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

It's amazing how a day with good weather can send such good vibes. I'm feeling it today myself. But I don't see poems about it often, so I'm happy to see one. Tyfs

[Abhishek]

Thanks for giving such a nice Review.
i hope your monday was a good day.

[Kim S.]

This is so wonderful, much enjoyed this write. you need to write more poems I can read.

[Abhishek]

thank you so much for giving me appreciation for this.
now i will more poems by heart.

Abhishek