I Love You Girl

I Love You Girl

A Poem by Abhinav
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How I feel about my girl......

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You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise
You're the last thing I think of
When I close my eyes

You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I cannot deny
You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be

Wish I could put it into words
Tell you just what it is I feel
Put my soul into a song
Prove to you it’s real

You are everything I want
You're so pure and true
I love you with everything I have
And I love everything that you do.




© 2010 Abhinav


Author's Note

Abhinav
Not exactly a poem in that sense,just a random write about feelings and stuff

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a random write? it seemed like u put some thought into it. it was good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is so cute :) I wish all boys were like this, instead of treating girls like a piece of dirt on the bottom of their shoe...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sweet. ;)
Love these lines:
"You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I cannot deny"

Posted 10 Years Ago


great work again
u certainly create the most beautiful and sweet love poems,


Posted 10 Years Ago


this was so sweet. Not only was the rhyme scheme amazing but the dialect was also, great job. I loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago


oh, this is so sweet!
cant stop saying awwwwwwww

Posted 10 Years Ago


haha I wasn't going to say it's cute, but looking over others' reviews, I decided that that's a good word to use. it's cute!
The audience is able to tell truly how much you like this person. There's just a tiny bit of cheesiness, and "seen this before" in it, but that's ok.
Nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


awww.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


It is a poem. A poem of love and thankfulness. I like the feel and desires in the poem. When we find someone that makes us content. They are the best days of our life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote


Posted 10 Years Ago



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Abhinav
Abhinav

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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