I Love You Girl

I Love You Girl

A Poem by Abhinav
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How I feel about my girl......

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You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise
You're the last thing I think of
When I close my eyes

You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I cannot deny
You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be

Wish I could put it into words
Tell you just what it is I feel
Put my soul into a song
Prove to you it’s real

You are everything I want
You're so pure and true
I love you with everything I have
And I love everything that you do.




© 2010 Abhinav


Author's Note

Abhinav
Not exactly a poem in that sense,just a random write about feelings and stuff

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The flow of this poem is smooth and I hope she liked the poem when you gave it to her.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is like a message of love, put into a poem, and it takes a lot of thought to do that.
I'll admit, I probably couldn't do this, and this isn't one of those sappy love poems either, it actually has true feeling to it.
Best of luck writing poems-
Veronica

Posted 14 Years Ago


I gotta admit, this is everything I feel for my angel. It's all there, down pat. I'm glad you managed to get this posted. I think I would be too busy with the one I love to write all this down.

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww !!! its so dang cute! i love it ! im adding this is my library.... did u write this for someone SPECIAL??? its really sweet and down to earth and you really let your feelings out! thats a great start!

-AnnaBanana!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An open and honest expression. Nice blend of lines. Just watch out when some would criticise the use of familiar lines like 'blink of an eye', etc. It is very pleasing to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2010
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Tags: Love, Love you, Love you girl, I love you, sweetheart

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Abhinav
Abhinav

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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