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Its All About Friendship

Its All About Friendship

A Poem by Abhinav

God must have known there would be times
We'd need a word of cheer,
Someone to praise a triumph
Or brush away a tear.

He must have known we'd need to share
The joy of "little things"
In order to appreciate
The happiness life brings.

I think He knew our troubled hearts
Would sometimes throb with pain,
At trials and misfortunes,
Or goals we can't attain.

He knew we'd need the comfort
Of an understanding heart
To give us strength and courage
To make a fresh, new start.

He knew we'd need companionship,
Unselfish... lasting... true,
And so God answered the heart's great need
With cherished friends... like you!

© 2010 Abhinav


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Sharing it ..and dedicating it to my best friend :) ..hope thats alright.
No technical pointers here..just really nice stuff that'll touch anyone who values friendship :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great descriptive, emotive, and faith based write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sunflower

Posted 10 Years Ago


excellent, and beautiful.
kuddos!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem is simply delightful. True friends are a great part of our lives. They make us want to live a little more, to live to see another day, to witness the sun rise once again even through all the pain we're going through. This poem is incredibly sweet and optimistic, for that I applaud you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


fantastic reminder of the importance of friends :) very well written and the rhyme and flow of this piece is great

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the message in this poem. The rhyme and the flow are also good. I really could see this being printed out as posters!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Like the flow of this.. Its a really nice read. Endearing !!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I absolutely loved it and I agree with everyone. The rhyming and flow was flawless, except for could you have done "Unselfish, lasting, true," instead of "Unselfish... lasting... true," I may just be a perfectionist, but it seemed a bit off for me for some reason. Other than that, fantastic =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


=) Nice read! Loved how you named some of the reasons why we all need friends!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Loved it. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Abhinav
Abhinav

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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