Premiership Football

Premiership Football

A Poem by Abhinav
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The life of the average premier league football fan

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This is the football Season it is that time of year
When men in the pub talk football as they enjoy their beer
And look forward to September when one club will fly the winner's flag
The team that wins the Premiership gives their fans the right to brag.

And if their team lose at the weekend they feel and look so sad
What's known as football addiction they seem to have it bad
They feel sad for their football team and the chance of three premiership points gone
But they cheer up and look forward to next weekend's game as the working week wears on.

This is the football Season football has gone to their head
And their football scarves and beanies they even wear to bed
About their team they feel so passionate as if to them it did belong
And its with delight and pride in victory that they sing the club song.

© 2010 Abhinav


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Abhinav
I'm one of them(the fans) any critical comments are welcome

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And their football scarves and beanies they even wear to bed - haha.. good one.. I was in Italy last time the World Cup was on and the streets were like EMPTY and all the eating joints & pubs were overflowing with people shouting at the screen.. good times

Posted 10 Years Ago


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im a football fan in my hometown. too bad our team suck this year... too many loses and no playoff *chuckles* this is a great piece for the season. i dig this one

Posted 10 Years Ago


Not bad, although I thought you could have done a lot more with this. Get a lot more detail and exploration of the Football mentality here. I might be in the USA here (where we call it soccer and don't get as intense about it) but I know that people will get quite intense at these games it almost a way of life for a lot of people. So I would just suggest that you get more into the intensity and expand on it. Good start though.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved the first stanza a lot. The second one was kinda iffy for me, and I liked the third one except for the first line seemed sort of like gibberish. Maybe make it "This is the football Season. Football has gone to their head"? It'll make more sense that way, at least to me. And I can tell how much you love the game! Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is passionate and very well said!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great poem. It is clear how passionate you are about the game. I don't think I am as big a fan as you are but I do enjoy watching the game :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your poem makes football sound awesome and engaging.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I cant imagine such a admiration for a game

Posted 10 Years Ago


Witty poem on football, very exceptional!
Once again, I must say that the flow could be better.
Try to read it out loud, then you know what I mean. ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice one...
and their football scraves and beanies they even wear to bed..lol! :P
u do dat too ???? ;) kiddin ....
a true footbaal freak ...way to go!

Posted 10 Years Ago


haaha good poem Fifa world cup is also on the horizon else than premier league
this poem describes a football fan's (I am also a one but not that much addicted) life really well
Keep on good job!
~Aaradhya

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 21, 2010
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Tags: Football, Premier league, England, Season

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Abhinav
Abhinav

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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