Sitam

Sitam

A Poem by Abhishek Asthana
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Sometimes it's more traumatic for one that the person whom you made so feel special yesterday, the same makes you feel so unwanted today.

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Muddaton se chaha tha tujhe, sach hai badi minnaton se paya tha,

zahen me jo aaya mere, yakeenan har wo tareeka aajmaya tha..

 

 

Par tujhe khone ke khauf me aie azeez, galib har pal ghabraya tha,

Har imtihaan se guzarne ko tha raazi, ke ye dil tera hi sarmaaya tha..

 

 

Muhabbat ki aatish se tha ye sama roshan, jiska shola tune bhadkaya tha,

Aakhri lamho me ikttijaa thi teri, par khuda ne rahem hi kab mujhpe barsaya tha..

 

 

Aasra ik tera hi tha hamko O zalim, kusoor itna tha ke tujhse dil lagaya tha,

Be-taseer tha kya ye ishq hamara, aab-e-chashm ka ghoot tune hame pilaya tha..

 

 

Ghayal the teri ham zafa se magar, muhabbat ke takht par hamne tujhe bithaya tha,

Naagawaar hum tumhe kyu hue kya khabar, toota wo khwaabo ka mela jo hamnne sang sajaya the..

 

 

Tukde hokar bikhra ye dil aakhir me, sitam hi tumne hampar aisa dhaaya tha,

Ye fariyad tere kaano me goonji jo dheerey se, koi aur nahi hamnashin wo mera hi saaya tha..!!



© 2017 Abhishek Asthana


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Are you kidding? Is This really your work...Looks like Mirza Galib's poetry...You surely are a Urdu Fan... I am just spell bound ...

Ab kya tareef karun?
Jo khud zarra zarra tareef ho
ab uski kya tareef karun

Your poems are amazing...This was a wonderful poetry...Keep it up

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

6 Years Ago

Oh my god !! i can't take it brother... i am a very common writer but yes i am a big fan of urdu... .. read more



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Nyc one.
Keep going.
Cheers and peace out.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words of and visit sudeep
ah.....masha Allah....itni khoobsurti hai hr lafz mein ki yeh shayari attracted me towards it.....i love this, i love this, i love this reallly!!!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

6 Years Ago

Thats an honor for me if you have found this write attractive... bht bht shukriya... Thanks for the .. read more
last lines are so amazing ...kya bolu mein .....badi achi likhto ho aap...likhte raho aur hum yuhi padte rahenge

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

aise koi baat nahi hai ...its just a fact ki last lines zyada pasand aati hai ,hahaha....vaise, pu.. read more
Abhishek Asthana

6 Years Ago

I know i was just kidding... if you would not have liked the first half then how would you have reac.. read more
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

My pleasure, abhishek.
I have no words to say how deep and heart touching this is. Every word has come from depth of your heart and shows your immense love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Trust me I who speak urdu cannot write such. You are most welcome.
Abhishek Asthana

6 Years Ago

not like that, in fact you write so well hindi-urdu poem,,, i have read some of your poems few weeks.. read more
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You are right urdu poetry sounds so deep and thoughtful.
The pain rite...
Firstly, I donno much hindi and that too not in pure words...But I tried google, flow of sentences..all made me to write more in Hindi wit proper words, So thank you.....And I enjoyed every bit of it....:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abhishek Asthana

6 Years Ago

thanks so much for reading it surya,,, yes it is an emotional write...that too i know u do not know .. read more
Surya

6 Years Ago

I understood it after much efforts... many Thanks to you, but I Believe finding treasure on own, mak.. read more

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Abhishek Asthana
Abhishek Asthana

Lucknow , The City of Nawabs, India



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