Wounds

Wounds

A Poem by Abilash Uttama
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Written for The Blue Rose Cafe ~ CHAUCERIAN RONDEL contest.

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Some wounds take more than time to heal

Emotions entangled are like ice, hard to keep

Tears roll out whenever they melt and seep

 

With these reminiscences of past, I still need to deal

I had been crying and I will be, with relentless urge to weep

Some wounds take more than time to heal

 

The pain of agonizing wounds I still feel

I was delicate back then, so cuts are deep

And this dust like pain time alone can’t sweep

Some wounds take more than time to heal

© 2015 Abilash Uttama


Author's Note

Abilash Uttama
this was a new experience because of rhyming pattern constraint, hope you like it.

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i was delicate back then, so wounds are deep.!!
bingo..well written

Posted 7 Years Ago


I don't really believe that wounds heal with time. I feel they just reside at the back of our minds and each time they are brought forward they hurt with the same intensity. With time, The frequency of us thinking about them decreases. And we begin to accept things the way they are. Maybe that is why it seems that wounds heal with time.
Anyway, you wrote well. Entangled emotions are hard to sort out.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by :)
Why do people say "wounds heal with time"? this is not the truth..
Anyways,i liked the last line....the essence of the line lingers on...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

Not every wound heals with time, but we can learn to live with them.
Do they actually ever heal?
I have applied like every kind of ointment and trust me dude,it took me nowhere.
Until,I realized there's no such ointment.
Anyway, the line "I was delicate back then"definitely tells me that you are better and stronger now.Its all about transcending from then to now.
Good one:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

I guess after sometime we learn to live with them, and like scars of a warrior they glorify us or at.. read more
This is really good. Some wounds do need more time. I liked it!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it :)
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A great delivery and emotional truth hanging on the repetition and the skillful rhyme. You did very well!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

thank you so much Ma'am :)
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8 Years Ago

:) welcome :)
it was a outstanding poem abhi

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

thank you g :)
Harpreet kaur bajwara

8 Years Ago

your always welcome G
true.......some wounds do take more than time to heal.......
so beautifully expressed.....
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

i am too small for Sir! you are welcome...............!!! :) :)
Abilash Uttama

8 Years Ago

I'm 19, i believe you are senior to me.
Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

i am just 22.........
Enjoyed the read! Keep writing and I'll keep looking!


Posted 9 Years Ago


Abilash Uttama

9 Years Ago

thanks sir and i will !
Wise words that anyone and everyone can relate to. Pain makes you stronger and more tolerant. Maybe time cannot heal your wounds, but your wounds can heal you and strengthen you into a better person.

On a different note, I guess IIT students are subjected to more pain than us normal human beings. Hang in there :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Isabel25

9 Years Ago

Note: Everyone who is good at Math is considered abnormal in my world. :P
Abilash Uttama

9 Years Ago

well now your world appears abnormal to me :D Anyways nice to meet you. virtual high five
Isabel25

9 Years Ago

Right back at you!! :)

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