Morning Star

A Poem by Abraham George

Dedicated to my dear friend i have here.

Every morning I wake up to see my Morning star.

All stars in the sky are shining, but my star is not. All ‘cause of her love.

Once she loved a man from earth and her love was endless.

The man from earth, she treated as a god from heaven.

I can see my star is crying and those tears falling like rain

burning my heart without touching my skin.

Deep inside she have flaming scoria that she hides with her fake glittering smile.

Whenever she expresses her love, Silence was the only answer she got.

Need to wait or wanna forget, she doesn’t know.

Only thing she knows is that she can’t forget him.

My tears are shedding when I listen to the song she sings,

For him to listen, but I don’t know whether he listens.

The music of pure love, pain of bereavement- I heard like this

“Even if you sleeping in those beautiful dreams of us,

Forgetfulness is the medicine you found to cure my Love,

Our celestial love will shaken your rhythm of life.

Please come to me even as your heart only,

Fly with me like a humming bird

Fondle me with your feathers; we can live in the nest that

I built in heaven using our loveable memories."

Her prayer will be answered even by the God Ebisu.

But why didn’t he? I will join in her prayer and let their celestial love wins,

‘Cause she is my morning star and my morning should be

filled with freshness and love due to her true smile from the bottom of her heart.

© 2017 Abraham George

Author's Note

show me my mistakes, let me correct it and make it perfect.

This is for a friend i have here and if that friend understand that it is for him/her, then i am happy.

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Firemay

i really like the fact that you went across the universe with this poem.
can i just correct you on something?
you cannot write "But why didn't?", it can be "But why didn't he?" as in why didn't he answer her prayer.
And also, the last sentence kind of doesn't ring right. you could maybe change it to " Cause she is my morning star and my morning should be
filled with freshness and love due to her true smile from the bottom of her heart."

Posted 6 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

thanks for the corrections.

6 Years Ago

corrected.

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Wajiha Nayeem

HEY DEAR, this is a really beautiful poem..and that friend is really lucky to have uh!....and the best part is everyone has here that one friend...!
as I HAVE SURYA.... congratulation for the wonderful friendship bond..and stay blessed both u ppl!

Posted 6 Years Ago

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6 Years Ago

always a pleasure...stay happy and stay blessed friend.

6 Years Ago

ok i wnna review this lovely adorable poem again....so well u have written with all your effort and .. read more

6 Years Ago

thanks for your support.

Najam Us Saher

I am glad I read it first. This is a best surprise I could receive from a friend. I am unable to express my happiness my mind is blank right now.
Your words are just so heart warming. I am honoured to have a friend like you. Thank you so much for your friendship. You made me smile. Today feels like a precious gift only because of this poem. I was stressed, worried a moment ago and after reading this all my worries melted away. You are making me cry now. Thank you so much friend. Your words spoke directly to me.