Dear Sister

Dear Sister

A Poem by Abraham George
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Dedicated to my Dear Sister

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You are an angel in disguise.

You are intelligent and wise.
Having a sister like you is a gift
Sometimes between us there’s a split.

 

I treasure the moments that we’d laugh together

I try to shoot jokes to make you feel better

Whether it’s a silly joke or corny

You laugh at them to make me happy

 

I share my secrets, coz’ you understand me

You shared yours, coz’ you trust me.

You are always there for me

Good times and bad time.

If I’m not there- please forgive me-

With you when you need me.

 

Whether it’s s silly joke or about that person in the corner

You’re open to me, which I honor.

That smiles and frowns on your picture I treasure

Stays there on your face forever I make sure.

I regret for the moments that we fight

Coz’ I believe that you are right.

 

May be our promises will fade

But sure in my heart you will hide
may be we have fight in many way

But couldn’t have survived life without you along the way

 

If I had one wish, it would surely be

To give you as a sister in my all lives
you’ve been my sunshine in so many ways.
In this world no one is perfect.
But in my world you’re Miss Perfect

 

I am very glad to have you as a sister

You give me tons of laughter

You are the best friend I've ever had.
My gratitude for you has no end.

 

 

© 2017 Abraham George


Author's Note

Abraham George
Forgive me for the mistakes- Like to get critic reviews to make this more good.- Editing help from- Tabby Mac. Thanks Tabby Mac

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I love to red tributes to loved ones. Especially siblings because I don’t have any. The thoughts are beautiful! You started off really strong...near the middle I think is where your words are heartfelt but seems like your wrestling between rhyme and the right words to describe your sister. This is a great first draft. I’d reread it a few times. If you rework a few lines it would really keep the momentum going till the end! The one stanza ends with me almost every line. You almost have it! The message is AWESOME! And the heart is definitely there!! I look forward to your revision!
Tabby

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abraham George

2 Years Ago

And i really love sisters because i really don't have one. I really need one and now i have one cute.. read more
Tabby Mac

2 Years Ago

That’s lovely! I shall try and give some specifics! I’ll message them to you!
Tabby
Abraham George

2 Years Ago

i am waiting for that.



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I love this poem very much! Specially because it's for your sister. I have a younger one and I love her a lot, it reminds me of how we were always the besties till the time we were not very busy, we had silly fights but that was like we had the right to fight because we are sisters. Now we are quite distant. Both of us are short tempered and I'm really lot because of my own problems sometimes. But she has always been my courage. And I'm quite protective and sometimes I feel it troubles her. Whatever it is but one thing that I can never forget is, my first poem was about her, my life's first poem that I wrote was for my little sister. I couldn't be the person I am if she never came into my life.

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is a moving, sincere and lovely tribute to your sister. It is so easy to take our loved ones for granted because of daily familiarity. That is why you deserve praise here for your gratitude towards your dear sister.

You wonderfully used your rhymes, with a natural flow and rhythm, to convey your sincere emotions for your sister.

well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Isn't it
To have you as my sister in all my lives
The poem was beautifully written👏👏👏

Posted 2 Years Ago


What a beautiful tribute to your sister. I think if you rework a few words and stanzas this will be extra strong. However, the emotions are definitely there!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abraham George

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the comments and i will check what i can do to make it Xtra strong.
I also have a sister and she is my best friend ..This poem won my heart.. really loved this poem😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


Awww, this is so sweet 💜

Posted 2 Years Ago


This again won my heart!!!😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abraham George

2 Years Ago

thanks for your comments and i am so happy to see you like it that much.
Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Years Ago

Indeed it did! You're heartedly welcome😊!
Aww...I also love my both brothers...don't know If they're away...how am gonna live...
You're one is truly heart touching!
Thanks for writing n sharing this😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


Abraham George

2 Years Ago

your brothers are lucky to have you as a sister.
Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Really gud ..ma frnd...I luv brothers a lot ...but the same I don't have one...Really hrt melting

Posted 2 Years Ago


hemapriya

2 Years Ago

Then I'm ur sis ryt ma bro
Abraham George

2 Years Ago

i wrote this for my sister Najam Us Saher. She reviewed this first.

You need me as a .. read more
hemapriya

2 Years Ago

Yup ...it's ur wish Abraham jst asked
It is excellent that you have such family unity and support; especially with a sibling! Your poetic write highlights the enthusiasm and appreciation of just such close family relationship – good share! :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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