MY SISTER

MY SISTER

A Poem by Abraham George
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Acrostic poem- giving a try

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Nurturing the way you care,
Ambitious you are, big achievements awaits,
Jazzy,your presence-little entertainer.
Adorable,Divine and Lovable- heard from every-side
Majestic the way you live.
Unaffected -facing monsters
Sister of mine- that I'm proud.
Scholarly, in your visions,
Appreciative, whatever you do,
Happy-go lucky your way to life,
Excellent, the way you carry yourself
Resilient you are- have confidence. 

© 2018 Abraham George


Author's Note

Abraham George
Acrostic Poem, my first try.

About my sister.

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What an attractive poem this is, and indeed such an amazing tribute to your sister that she will certainly never forget and forever cherish. For me it does say a lot about you as a brother, and that is truly Sweet!

Nicely done!!!
:-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Abraham George

3 Years Ago

sorry for the delayed reply. your comments are so nice. for a long time, I didn't write here. but I .. read more
The cute nd sweet poem ...such a proud sister to have u as a brother...aft a long tym came across an awesome one

Posted 3 Years Ago


Abraham George

3 Years Ago

so happy to see your comments
OH....Ik this poet on the site... A very nurtured in a brotherly way type tribute... You can see genuine affection for the name... A well-thought out acrostic poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


Abraham George

5 Years Ago

Thanks for your valuable time on my work and your nice words.

Abram Geo
This is something she will cherish forever. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by and commenting over my work.
Very sweet poem! Great first try :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.

Glad to know you liked.
I really like the theme of affection running through this poem. Tells me there’s still hope for friendship and love. Well said!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

She is a poet her, Najam Us Saher.
We didnt met, but now she is my little sister.
I lo.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Years Ago

You are welcome. Keep writing.
What a wonderful nod to your sister, I love that you have such a good relationship with her and that you tell her through your writing that you are so proud. Great acrostic, loved it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Thanks bro
She is my little angel, i love her. So adorable.

Thanks for comment.. read more
You and Najam have such beautiful bond between you two.. and I just love it. And so creative this piece of art is! Wow. Just keep on writing for each other, and keep on making my day.😅😅.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the time dear.
She is my little sister, so adorable and lovable.
I am playi.. read more
Anjali

6 Years Ago

That's so sweet! Keep on playing that role... It suits you..😊
Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Hihi thanks Anjali behan.
I have 3 sisters and I don't feel any of what you said about them. But, hell yes, I want that. It is so beautiful to be able to see the way you feel about her and how you view her. This poem brought tears to my eyes I cant say anything but beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, just beautiful. I really loved these three lines so much:
"Majestic the way you live.
Unaffected -facing monsters
Sister of mine- that I'm proud."
And by the way, are the letters starting each line supposed to make up her name or another word?
Cause the first 5 lines make the word "Najam" which means "star" in Arabic, and the last 5 lines make the word "Saher" and it means "watchful".

Posted 6 Years Ago


Abraham George

6 Years Ago

Her Name is Najam US Saher. See the first one who posted comment on this poem.

I am .. read more
(Jeff) I saw your sister once in my bed. You can imagine how this story ends

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Abraham George

6 Years Ago

yeah i remember. That day when you try to flirt with her, Along with my sister i was there punching .. read more
The Immortal  Phoenix

6 Years Ago

(Micky) Im shure you havent ever met Jeff in real life you would have died....From laughing

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Thrissur, Kerala, India



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