The Cathartic

Life.

The aberration of affection
found me; caught in purgatory
a time of disruption
a time of a burrow so deep

The aberration of affection
found a way to be
in a place of disruption
in a burrow so deep

far from the thin slivers of light
enthralled in the crawl
reaching for thin slivers of light
reaching, tempting the great fall

How did the aberration of purity
answer a call
that had yet to be, Pumice
The Universal cure-all

Author's Note

An alternate revision- using Denisse instead of Pumice
Art: Catharsis by -lien

Reviews

[Victoria]

I loved the use of language and how well it flowed. I also enjoyed being able to follow it very nicely. The message was clear and very easy to get too. I found the read to be very unique well perceived. I look forward to reading other ones you have written. Thank you for sharing!

[Onlyme]

I loved the way this just flowed like a melody graceful deep and enchanting.

[Dominik D. Ravens]

"The aberration of affection" is a very catchy way of putting it. I like it and it definitely helps to send the message. Well done!

[miSS LEaf]

wow i really enjoyed this, well done, and thank you for your review :)

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