Unwanted, Unloved...

Unwanted, Unloved...

A Poem by Little Sparrow
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A poem about feeling unwanted and unloved

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Don't feel lonely, because I'm always here for you..


Don't feel unloved, because I do love you..


Don't feel that no one is behind your back, because I'm here to support you..


Don't feel those cold wall corners, instead feel my warm hug..


Don't feel uncared for, because I'm thinking how will I show you how much I care.


Don't look for somebody else... because I will never leave your side... forever.. ♥

© 2012 Little Sparrow


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Little Sparrow
Please ignore my grammar.. :)) Thanks! Please review it. :) i accept anything

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I love it, I just have a problem with the last line. Maybe use "...lonely" in the last line, and then get rid of the first. They're both kinda the same.
Also, using "never" then "forever" are contradictory.
Great piece though

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on September 5, 2012
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Little Sparrow
Little Sparrow

Madrid, Spain



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Hello, my name is Abrianna. I was born in Madrid but I didn't grew up there. :)) I love to smile, sing, text, laugh, have a good time, and be with my loved ones. Most importantly, writing! I discover.. more..

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