Niro

Niro

A Poem by Abyrdun
"

Obsession over strangers. Fixating on one person in a crowd of thousands for reasons you're not entirely sure of.

"
 Niro 50
Halfway between a prisoner and a recruit,
inside some bizarre army of cowards.
Lambs being led towards wicked, grinding, blades.
And she, she who could be as I, -still-
and so full of mystery yet.

She who captures my intrigue.

I wish to press your glass figure backwards,
to watch it fall and shatter.
I wish to play in the pieces until
my hands are stained red.
When I know the shards well:
I wish to rebuild you, 
and bask in the shadow of
your new, crimson, form.
16/09/13

© 2013 Abyrdun


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"She who captures my intrigue.



I wish to press your glass figure backwards,

to watch it fall and shatter.
I wish to play in the pieces until

my hands are stained red.




When I know the shards well:
I wish to rebuild you,

and bask in the shadow of

your new, crimson, form."

A very good poem. I like the ending the most...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abyrdun

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it! Your feedback is greatly appreciated and always welcome.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)..................



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"She who captures my intrigue.



I wish to press your glass figure backwards,

to watch it fall and shatter.
I wish to play in the pieces until

my hands are stained red.




When I know the shards well:
I wish to rebuild you,

and bask in the shadow of

your new, crimson, form."

A very good poem. I like the ending the most...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abyrdun

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it! Your feedback is greatly appreciated and always welcome.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)..................

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Added on November 19, 2013
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Abyrdun
Abyrdun

Portrush on Ballymoney, County Antrim, Ireland



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