4 Days

Keep your head up, it's only 4 more days.

Why is it that you cannot stop asking questions,

I get that you’re afraid but you’re causing this disconnection.

Oh look here, we seem to be in session.

God knows this is lacking affection.

Tell me what is it that causes all this aggression?

Is it simply because you don’t like his complexion?

Or is it that you’re afraid of his intentions?

His love for me spreads like an infection,

To you that’s bad but to me I’m excited for his lessons.

I know for you this seems like a bizarre direction.

But I have no doubt in my mind this will lead to succession.

So take a moment and look at your selection.

You words won’t leave nothing but an impression.

Words can cut deep and I’ve got quite the collection.

So take a moment from this obsession.

Take a look at your own reflection.

You know your life is in recession.

But don’t hate me because of your imperfections.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

This poem brings across a very strong feeling and I like the way you have used the words at the end of each line. Well done

[Asante]

Nice write. :)

To me, this has the undertones of an interracial relationship being called into question. I loved the wording in this as it kept things clear and easy to follow. Good work!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Well written. How you ended each line with a rhyme of the same. I like the message as well. :)

[Acatalepsy]

Thank you very much :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!