Paper Monster

Paper Monster

I believe in the ghosts from this strange place and

In the stupidities that make you laugh

I believe in everything you write about

The closer I enter your world

I feel fragile

Running after your beasts

Pick up your pen and fight

Author's Note

Paper Monster

Reviews

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
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Not trying to be mean here but,I use pencil instead of pen and I need those beasts so that I could write my stories.those beasts are my characters,and they are me.I don't want to throw them them away because they are part of the me.Yeah,this is good.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you appreciate your review and that is what was trying to say in the poem for writers to write about what they want to write about for readers to review.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Its like an inspiration for some writer, very nice!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, appreciate your review and advice in a world that persons are lured to write about darkness, hopefully this will enlighten them.

[gabrielle]

This is very interesting write. I read it several times and my mind conjured different interpretations each time. The pen is powerful. it should be used for healing not for killing.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you I appreciate your interpretation and your advice on how to use the pen.

[ron]

This is a beautiful poem about writing your ghost and demons away.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you ron, I like your interpretation.

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[A.Samson]

Short and straight,very meaningful.Each word carries its own weight.

[A.Samson]

Short and straight,very meaninful.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your interpretation A.Samson, really appreciate your description.

[Harmartia Poe]

I had to read the poem a few times to grasp the meaning entirely, but I really like the concept :) I know that I use my pen as a weapon a lot of the time. I vent my problems in life and I turn them into something beautiful when I write. I really enjoy this poem. I picture monsters and demons and a little you with a pen, scribbling them away. Writers fully immerse themselves in the world and all the worlds that lie within. You allow me to immerse myself into yours. Well written :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you I appreciate your interpretation and your imagery and you are right most living persons have good advice for those that are willing to listen and it makes us lucky because as writers we are those persons.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Nice work here Anika, dear...

I could interpret this as all of the frustrations, and things, not to be said out loud, are written on such a blank sheet of paper, until it becomes a monster of ink...
Now once crumpled, rest returns.... but you did fought, before, and that's the message you want to bring over, to your readers. Good one... ;)

- Elisa :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you Eli for your interpretation, I really appreciate it.

The pleasure is all mine...

[Healing Star]

SquinklaPsyOps interesting name ... I would like to here where its roots are. You are a very Brilliant young lady is what I am feeling. You did a beautiful job on this piece, I had to think about it, and then I read one of your responses to help me understand where you were coming from. It is good when stupidities make us laugh, much better than getting angry, we can deal with it better from a place of humor, of laughing at ourselves and others who effect us with their stupidity. With some writers you can believe everything they write about, certainly with me, ha ha. But really I primarily write as a messenger to the Hearts that want to hear from themselves inside, from our ancestors inside. Yes, to really understand someones writing of where they are coming from we need to commit and become fragile and vulnerable, we don't know what dragons they might be fighting. Yeah, in a way I am writing to fight for my voice being heard, I lived most of my life quietly not wanting to be noticed. But yeah, you put that well I am fighting, and want others to join me to fight against the injustice that has been committed against us all, for a plan that leads to nowhere, no tomorrow. I want everyone to fight, I want you to fight, fight with all your Heart to break down the walls, to open our Hearts to let the sunshine in. Keep your Heart open and keep writing from there, and keep fighting to be free.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you, I appreciate your interpretation and you are right that stupidities should make us laugh instead of making us angry, it is better that the person that is angry does not succeed in trying to get the other person angry.

My friend next door neighbor is an old lady that is loosing her hair and she is always angry and she always tries to get us angry and we just ignore her, she even named her dogs after our names to try to get us angry and we ignore her because we know is not her fault and is a group of demons inside of her that are trying to take her to hell and that make her do those things to try to recruit other persons and my friend hopes she finds her common sense.

[Fran Marie]

the pen is a powerful weapon for fighting those ghosts of the past..a short precise piece..so well penned!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you for your review, I really wish those ghost that bother would stay in the past, or for them to go bother their own families.