The Urge

The Urge

A Poem by Adalynn

The urge takes over me,
i cant stay strong anymore,
i run to the bathroom,
making myself give up,
every calorie and carb,
the walls are covered with,
prettier and skinnier girls,
i wish everyday,
that i could look like them,
id give anthing to be the girl,
the guys want,
who gets looked at,
and told your beautiful,
insted im the one in the backgroundd,
never noticed unless im gettin made fun of,
i cant be strong anymore,
the urge,
the need contols me,
i cant fight it,
it consumes me.

© 2012 Adalynn

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such pure emotions, starting with the longing of belonging and desperation, to the shift of "i give up."

however, don't try to be something your not. ignore everyone else. I know it's easier said than done, but this is only a phase...we all go through it.
Give up on trying to be like everyone else, don't give up on yourself.
nice write again, by the way.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A slow death with no physical pain just void emotions... This is a fight that "consumes" and controls.. this is a very powerful write.. well done..x

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, such a powerful poem. It hits me deep since I personally knew someone with this disease. I believe no matter who you are you are beautiful. This person can fight it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on January 19, 2012
Last Updated on January 19, 2012



Cookville, TN

Not much to say. I love writing i am more of a morbid dark writer then anything else. I sing and dance and love to read i love music and i love photography as well.. more..