A Poem by Adalynn

He takes off her clothes,
and pushes her on her bed,
she trys to scream,
noone hears her,
he kisses her,
and runs his hands over her,
She trys to escape,
but he is to strong,
he shoves his man hood in,
and starts pounding her hard,
she yells get off,
but he just slaps her,
he finishes and gets off,
telling her to not tell or she will pay,
she curls in a ball,
wondering what she did to desserve this.

© 2012 Adalynn

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This is very relateable... It made me cry... Nicely written...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Quite graphic, but not as graphic as it could be, thank god. There was so much emotion in this, I really have to admire how in such a short poem you managed to stuff all the sadness and pain into it. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

right to the point with a deep message

Posted 11 Years Ago

I fear reading about violence, especially towards females. There is a sorrow within me that always wells up into a rage. Just being able to write about it, you have shown your growing power. Very good piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago

When writing about rape, you really have to hit points from the angle of the abused... there is a typo here.. "she shoves his man hood in," i think you meant "he?"

try branching out in the words that give emotion, it adds affect and impact to the piece. But this is a good start, keep experimenting and writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on January 19, 2012
Last Updated on January 19, 2012



Cookville, TN

Not much to say. I love writing i am more of a morbid dark writer then anything else. I sing and dance and love to read i love music and i love photography as well.. more..

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