Darkness Creeps Over Me

Darkness Creeps Over Me

A Poem by Adalynn

Darkness creeps over me,

i cant control it,

it comsumes me,

what do i do,

where do i run to,

mylegs are far to weak,

and i have no one,

i did this to myself,

none else is to blame,

the cutting,

the drugs,

i went to far,

i pushed things to far,

i'm left with nothing,

an no one,

except the darkness,

that creeps over me.

© 2012 Adalynn

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Now that is a sad note, though not too bad. Everybody can always get that shine to overcome the darkness that overwhelms them. This poem is wonderful, i love it. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago

As humans. It happens to all of us. We have to learn how to control it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was a nice write. I have been in the darkness before. I used to cut. So I can relate. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

There are multiple artists on here that feel this way. And through this community, we support each other. With legs being far too weak, you stop. You turn around and face the Darkness. That stumbling block turns into a stepping stone.

Posted 11 Years Ago

The darkness consumes us all and as aperson who has more than one vice i understand this write so very well.
It speaks straight from the heart and goes right past the bullshit flaws sometimes give us that perfect sense in writting i belive really great
write cheers Gonzo

Posted 11 Years Ago

A powerful poem with a sad story. Easy to fall down to low levels. Easy to torture the mind and body with drugs and pain. Hard to get up and tell the world to f-off and leave the bad thoughts and life behind. No weakness in this poem. Just honest and strong words. A excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Drugs and cutting are the worst things you can do to your body. There a good source of that darkness you speak of. Sometimes it's always worse at night.
Good poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

strong lament is felt as you read through the lines. I think the point that you are trying to get through is very well echoed throughout the whole poem, the last first lines are also very important to this.
nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on January 19, 2012
Last Updated on January 19, 2012



Cookville, TN

Not much to say. I love writing i am more of a morbid dark writer then anything else. I sing and dance and love to read i love music and i love photography as well.. more..

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