Darkness Creeps Over Me

Darkness creeps over me,

i cant control it,

it comsumes me,

what do i do,

where do i run to,

mylegs are far to weak,

and i have no one,

i did this to myself,

none else is to blame,

the cutting,

the drugs,

i went to far,

i pushed things to far,

i'm left with nothing,

an no one,

except the darkness,

that creeps over me.

Reviews

[Abd-afeez]

Now that is a sad note, though not too bad. Everybody can always get that shine to overcome the darkness that overwhelms them. This poem is wonderful, i love it. Thanks for sharing!

[joshua deathdealer]

As humans. It happens to all of us. We have to learn how to control it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a nice write. I have been in the darkness before. I used to cut. So I can relate. Thanks for sharing.

[zero binty]

There are multiple artists on here that feel this way. And through this community, we support each other. With legs being far too weak, you stop. You turn around and face the Darkness. That stumbling block turns into a stepping stone.

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

The darkness consumes us all and as aperson who has more than one vice i understand this write so very well.
It speaks straight from the heart and goes right past the bullshit flaws sometimes give us that perfect sense in writting i belive really great
write cheers Gonzo

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a sad story. Easy to fall down to low levels. Easy to torture the mind and body with drugs and pain. Hard to get up and tell the world to f-off and leave the bad thoughts and life behind. No weakness in this poem. Just honest and strong words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Bare trees]

Drugs and cutting are the worst things you can do to your body. There a good source of that darkness you speak of. Sometimes it's always worse at night.
Good poem.

[falling_toxic_rain]

strong lament is felt as you read through the lines. I think the point that you are trying to get through is very well echoed throughout the whole poem, the last first lines are also very important to this.
nice write.