Sonnet II – Human raven

Sonnet II – Human raven

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
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Marking three years since my angel passed away

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Upon her bleak grave a raven stood still

Before the frigid exanimate tombstone

His heart was bitter, nostalgic, and ill

In every inch an ever blazing moan

 

It’s been exactly three years since she died

But his devoted heart can’t part her trace

You could see in his eyes the tears that dried

And some dying tinctures of once a grace

 

An old man draws near him and pats his back

When the human raven stared back at him

“Why the long face?” said the geezer in black

The raven said and drew a sigh so grim

 

“I’m dead! For my love has left this domain

I am a wraith death has cursed with pain”

© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-


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sue
very deep lovely :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Sue!
and this answers any questions the first piece raised..

the death of a loved one can curse us forever...

we fly like the raven, and now, with no purpose.

jacob

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Indeed! thank you for reviewing and for your words!
What can I say, I Love It. Another one going in my library. You just keep getting better and better.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I am honored
Tarry Franck

8 Years Ago

:)
Very nice pen upon this tale of sadness.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing! much appreciated!
Eric Cox

8 Years Ago

you're welcome

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Tags: sonnet, death, love, sadness, gothic, emo, grave, ill, trance, old, pain, adam, corpse

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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