Sonnet III - Astray!

Sonnet III - Astray!

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
"

Sometimes you need to forget everything and just empty your mind and thought

"

 

That night was mystical and entrancing,

That eve sure had a secret up its sleeve.

I didn’t feel like sitting and nagging,

For morbid, amok thoughts began to weave.

 

I went out for a walk amidst the dark

For I needed to merge with it again

I left my coat and hat and did embark

Through caliginous streets beneath the rain

 

Streets as sprawling as the ones in my mind

Hiding ancient tales, tears, smiles and myths

Their phantoms died, deaden, and lay confined

Tales of life and love, and tales of cruel deaths

 

It’s quite useful to go astray at times

Through roads without burn marks or guiding signs

© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
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Excellent poem - flawless

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

thank you, Tarry
Tarry Franck

8 Years Ago

My pleasure
A very well written sonnet my friend.....Whisk

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing
Much honored
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sue
you are of the same mind we tread places that have so many tales to tell. great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

I have lots more to tell, I'll be honored if you stayed close ;)
Yes of course : It’s quite useful to go astray at times

Through roads without burn marks or guiding signs

perfect description of how we feel sometimes .

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Dalia
Glad you liked it
I do think! I like the question posed here, and the sonnet form.. You do them very well Adam.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

Always interested to hear what you think, LA
thanks for passing by
Flows beautifully, and extremely well-worded, amazing poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

I am very humbled... Thank you
This is a nice sonnet, flows well. It makes me want to write one now haha. Keep at it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

8 Years Ago

i am honored! thank you
Sam Gregory

8 Years Ago

haha np

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Tags: astray, dark, amok, morbid, gothic, walk, streets, night, eve, magic, memories, pain, tales, myth, secret

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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