Death omen

Death omen

A Poem by Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
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How all prophets have been met with. However, here... they dont listen!

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I wake up at the spark
From a coma in the dark
Where am I? Where was I?


And shadows cross my sight
Like silhouettes in the night
And loud I bode and cry

Did you see the dire blast?
Dread death will thrash us fast
And all of us will die

Then waves of laughter troll
Noises that covers my call
"I am telling no lie!!"

An omen I foresaw
On a ruin a black crow
Heralding the last sigh

Lest you die, come with me!
Take my hands unto safety
To god’s command comply

 

“Loon you are certainly!

To claim such absurdity”

And they mocked my try

 

I kept warning for naught

Humanity favor I sought

As I raised my outcry


But alas they are gone
God’s fateful wrath fell upon
Crimson and silent they lie

© 2013 Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-


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Em
I really like how you write. so good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Em

6 Years Ago

ordinary is spectacular
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

thank you again
I am humbled
Em

6 Years Ago

:)
This is an amazing write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Glad you liked it
Tarry Franck

6 Years Ago

My pleasure
A very interesting poem indeed, it made me think of fallen angels for some reason. You are a talented poet from what I've read friend. :)


-Angela-

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Thank you
I am humbled
The cry of the crow.. the thin veil between heaven and earth.. I loved this and you sealed it well with your last stanza..xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

I like to give ravens many forms
one as lost souls came to warn
maybe god's signs of doo.. read more
i find it amazing that people would deny prophets after seeing signs and acts of god on their behalf the funny thing is that history has a way of repeating itself this was well captured well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

History repeats itself because the people are the same at every era!
thank you!
Wow, this is awesome, thanks for posting ^-^

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Faria C

6 Years Ago

C=
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Tell me if I can help more
Faria C

6 Years Ago

Aw, that's nice of you, thanks. Keep up the good work in writing =3
WOWWWWWWW! Adam ! beautiful , magnificent !
But just to be sure that i got it , you are talking about the prophets when Allah sent them to guide the humanity to the light , but most of them denied the prophets
call , right?

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Indeed! :)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

6 Years Ago

Yeah , i love it !!!
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sue
good read :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Honored! thank you
Another interesting write from you. You seem to write a lot. Do you have these stockpiled in your vaults, or do you never sleep? 4th stanza, 1st line. TROLL? did you perhaps mean toll?

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

I have insomnia = almost dont sleep!
And yeah I write daily lol
About "troll" an english.. read more
LA Lorena

6 Years Ago

okay, that clears that up then. you are usually quite careful, so I was not sure if it was a typo or.. read more
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Indeed! thanks for the note though
if you noticed anything odd please do tell!
Great poem
And choosing to start it with the questions draws the reader's attention ,
stunning as usual

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Dalia :)

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Tags: death, mors, mortal, mortality, dooms day, omen, god, humanity, gothic, the end, humans, twist, poetry, adam

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Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-
Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-

Amman, Middle East, Jordan



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