♥ I Dream ♥

♥ To: My Father in Heaven Love: Your Daughter Tessa Danielle ♥

I Dream- Tessa Danielle Guise

 

 

I dream about the day I will get to see the light.

I dream how everyday will be bright and perfect.

I dream that I will no longer be bullied for who I am.

I dream about the day I will be in your arms

I dream about the day it will all make sense to me

 

That day will be the best day of my whole life.

Better that what I've already lived for

When Im old and its my time to go

I will be ready to go.

I will be with my Father forever

I will no longer feel the hurt or be scared or lonely

I will always believe that there will be a place for me in heaven

 

I will Always DREAM ABOUT THAT DAY!

 

 

 

©TessaDanielleGuise

Author's Note

I hope y'all enjoy this poem I wrote... One night I had a dream that helped me write this.. I means alot to me... Im not a very good writer but I don't think this was to bad... I hope y'all enjoy!!!!!

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nicely done! I can relate to dreaming about spending time with someone... but its not with God... Anyhow, this was very well written! Keep writing.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

thank you so much buddy..lol... I will try to keep writing ♥

[wordman]

dreams can take us many places a great job

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

thank you so much.. oh i seen ur from tennessee.. i was born & half raised there.. wow.. i really miss it there...lol

[wordman]

I was born in Chickamauga ga lived in fla,virginia,north Carolina and tennessee

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

oh wow... so have you ever been to kinsport, tennessee??? thats where i was born

[wordman]

several times

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

oh.. you lucky person you...lol.. I will hopefully be back there soon..lol

[wordman]

go through there when we go to gattlinburg

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

OHH..OK..LOL... STILL YOU LUCKY PERSON YOU!!!! LOL

[Honey-Bee]

Lovely write! The most perfect dream!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you very much Honey-Bee!!! That means alot!!! ♥

[Terrence Chang]

I hope that your dreams come true. Good work Tessa. Keep posting

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much Terrence... I hope so too.. But when im old though..lol..Im to young right now... Im looking forward to reading your work too... Again thank you for your kind words ;-) ♥

[Terrence Chang]

It was my pleasure Tessa. Have a warm welcome to my page

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

ok.i will. Thank you so much my dear!! ♥ I will check out your stuff ;-) ♥

[Terrence Chang]

Take your time no issue

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you.. I read one of your poems already.. gettin ready to read more.. Your not a bad writer at all.. very good actually... you know what.. how bout you message me & i will get back to you..ok..♥

[Valentine]

With our God, all things are possible. Perhaps you will get a seat near mine in Heaven. Valentine

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

That would be so cool.. Thank you so much for reviewing my poem! ♥

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

You have the gift young padawan.. Lol.. You just have to keep at it. I was not a perfect writer when I started and to this day, I'm still not perfect. You will always learn and grow. You just have to keep trying.
This poem was a beautiful piece, to match your glowing personality!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much.... I will keep that in my mind.... & what r u talking about... u were amazing when u started 2.. soooo there!!!! lol

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Your welcome young padawan.. May the force be with you! haahaha

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Omg.... What does that mean???? ( looking at the computer like it stupid)

[GreenEyedPoet]

I liked the poem, I thought it was nicely written. I don't think you're a bad writer, and if you keep at it you'll get even better and hopefully you'll feel differently about your pieces.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thanks so much.. That means alot... This came to me one morning. I've had a few other people read what I wrote. I've been told I need to write more. This is just something that I do for fun. Not a career... But I will try to see if I can write another poem about my boyfriend/ soon-to-be fiance... Thank you again♥

[AaronFreitas]

Very good work Tessa :) I enjoyed it and don't say you're a bad writer... you just proved that you aren't. Good work and keep writing.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much... I was 14 when I wrote this... It came from a dream that I had... I have dreams about goin to heaven. I ain't afraid. But I don't wanna go right now... I actually don't wanna make a career of writing. I wanna be a veternairan... But all the ones who read this on my blog thought it was a very good piece... I've been told I can write good. I've writen alot of poems for school. I still do oncein awhile... Thank you so much for the Review Aaron :-) ♥