Why Do You Question My LOVE?

This poem is for my boyfriend Adam!!!

Why Do You Question My LOVE?
 
Why do you question my love?
Everything I feel for you, is true.
I told you the way that I feel,
And still you don’t believe it’s real.
 
Your disbelief hurts me inside.
Please stop believing other
People’s lives.
I need you to see,
My definition of forever,
Is you and me.
 
I wish you would trust me.
Believe the words I say.
Don’t let disbelievers be the reason you sway.
 
I love you.
And this you must believe.
You are all I want in life.
The best thing that ever happened to me.
 
So please,
Stop questioning my love.
 
©3-29-2015 by Tessa Danielle Nordyke

Author's Note

This poem I wrote for Adam.. I tell him I LOVE him yet he still Questions me.. He told me he loved me first... So should i question him??? I wanted to than Ashley (Nikki Cobain) for helping me write this... Without you this poem wouldn't be right!!! LOve you Sissy!!! ♥

Reviews

[Aphy!]

This was very beautifully written and YES often people have questioned how you feel but personally I feel that people who are not used to being "loved" don't really respond well to love. They question anything and everything that might indicate that other people care because they haven't been loved themselves. They push you away because their not used to being loved. But in your personal experience...maybe Adam's a bit scared. I really don't know. With that said...I loved your piece and it got my little brain cells tingling with questions and thoughts (Got me contemplating and thinking about A LOT)
So thank you for opening my eyes and sharing this lovely poem
Aphy

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

wow.. thank you for your kind words.. I wrote this a while ago and it kinda helped with some problems.. But Adam I guess is just scared cuz the other day he played a game on me and it was a lie the whole time.. I hurt for for days.. it bothered me.. but thank you so much for your kind words Aphy.. And im glad I could help you too.. LOL :) Goodluck!

[Aphy!]

Thank u and hope everything goes well hey!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

thank you so much .. I hope everything goes well for you too! Thanx

[Einstein Noodle]

i read your about me and sweet girl .. you are way too young to start to think about a serious love relationship .. (sorry .. i am an old dad with two daughters and a granddaughter almost your age ;)
there is a wonderful and charming innocence to your poem .. your first verse starts things out very strong .. rhyme and rhythm wise .. then it kind of separates a bit in favor of a more free verse thing .. more emotive .. as a reader i want a bit more continuity ..
its a confessional poem which is always a bit of a risk .. but yours is spot on .. touches a golden time of life when so much spreads out before us .. including the promise of true and abiding love .. you be careful out there girl ;)
i really enjoyed reading and sharing in your youthful excitement and doubts
E.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

thank you.. I have nothing to worry bout.. Adam is totally different.... y'all may think he is like all teenage boys.. but he ain't.. he is very sweet.. & so are you.. thank you so much for the review.. it means a lot..i will be careful though.. im glad you liked the poem.. oh warm regards too you..
-Tess

[Einstein Noodle]

i am sure he is .. my oldest (a daughter) had an older boyfriend when she was a junior in high school ...he was the best thing for her at the time and kept her away from some of her wilder "friends" .. :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol... that could be a good thing.. lol

[Einstein Noodle]

from my point of view it certainly was ;)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol.. yea I know!!!

[Terrence Chang]

Good writing Tess. I really liked it

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

thank you so much Terrense.. That truly means alot to me ♥

[Terrence Chang]

You are welcome

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

hey i've missed talkin to you.. but sadly i dont have the time.. cuz Adam is comin over.. so i will be going soon.. i hope to talk to you tuesday.. hopefully...lol

[Terrence Chang]

Sure why not

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

HEY.... YOU CAN MESSAGE ME WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE!!! LOL ♥

[E G TEN]

Truly sincere, honest and with a demanding course of action. Trust is a must in all of relationship forms and kinds.. Nicely written thanks for sharing!;)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

No problem.. Thank you for leaving a kind review... ♥

[Confuser]

It is lovely and such a heartfelt sentiment Tessa....He should believe you: tell him I said so too! What great writing. Keep writing. Thank you so very much. Dale

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much..lol.. I will tell him too... I will try to keep writing lol...Thank you again.. -Tess

[Confuser]

You're welcome...such a sweet couple.

[Kurai.Merodi]

Really see how you desperately want him to see how much you care. And with this he should be able to see. If he doesn't... hit him over the head then kiss 'im! ... Yer, I'm and extremist so it may be best for you not to do that... >.o

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol.... I dont think hitting him would be a good idea..lol.. But thank you for the review & the idea..lol ♥

[Kurai.Merodi]

:3 anytime

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol... thats a funny face..lol

[Kurai.Merodi]

>.< i dunno whether to be offended or happy?

[wordman]

what ,a person with no name be offended. lol

[Kurai.Merodi]

ya bet ya socks i'll be :P

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol.. no that on smily that you sent just made me laugh.. thats all...lol

[Kurai.Merodi]

ooooh... then all is forgiven -bows- >.

[Elisa]

I can definitely see the desperation from your words, showing your intense desire to convince Adam that you truly love him. It's SO frustrating when people don't believe the things you say, because everyone has a desire to be heard, but what's the point if your words are discounted? I liked this poem. Good job!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much Elisa.. I know it makes me really mad that Adam does this to me.. i wish he would believe me ...

[AaronFreitas]

Good work Tessa... and Ashley haha.... I am going through divorce so probably not the best person to give advice about love haha

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol... No its ok.. I've had enough advice to last me a life time..lol.. Thank you for reviewing my poem Aaron♥

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Oh, what a darling poem! lol. This is the mind of a brilliant little padawan at work, ladies and gentledudes!! LOL!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol...thank you ashley.. that is really cute..lol

[&hearts; Ari Skye &hearts;]

You're welcome my young padawan. tehe

[FREE_BIRD]

good to know about your love,i enjoyed it while reading...keep showing your love and he will trust one day.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much...Thank you for your time..♥