This is my story

Adam James Guise

On the day we met

I wasn't expecting my life to change.

I wasn't looking for love;

I wasn't looking for a companion

But now I am terrified

To picture life without you....

If you walk away

What would I have left?

What will I do?

These are my thoughts without you

I cant imagine me without you

You complete me

I need you

I need your love

If you go

I will not live

I will drown in my own sorrows

All I have is you

I love you

listen to those words as they come out of my mouth

I love you

My life is you

Its with you

Don't leave

Just stay

I need you

Author's Note

I hope y'all like this poem. Its probably not the best. But I hope you like it.. I hope to se nice reviews. But if I see criticism I am willing to take it! Thank you for your time

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

My life is you
Its with you
Don't leave.
Bullshit! You do not need him miss lady ma'am. He sounds to me like some guy who cant keep his pants up with a belt or sky high suppenders. Yours gonna be alright kid, just wait on all those guy's looking too carry your bags out (which might be what? a Million)

[Mai L Nissen]

That is quite a love declaration :) The unexpected love can sometimes be the deepest! I hope this love turned out well. Thanks for sharing

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Again, i only hope he values your poetry. :)

my favorite lines from this piece " If you go
I will not live
I will drown in my own sorrows
All I have is you"

i know what you mean, I'd die without my Andy.
again, and as always I'll give a hundred points for this piece. :)
keep writing :D

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you for the 100 pints.. hahahah... YAY! I feel special. well I don't really know if Adam Likes them or not. I just feel that I work harder than what I should. I try my best to make him happy. I love him. I am currently trying to get him to spend Thanksgiving with me. but I don't know if he will or not! But thank you for the friendly review. I love you so much baby bro!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're always welcome :D

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

hahaha.. yay!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lol :D)))))))))

[Einstein Noodle]

you are back!!!! nice to read your stuff again! :) what a very honest outpouring of love and need along with must come great risk and fear ... first loves especially can be so devastating if they turn out to be lopsided (if you know what i mean) i wouldn't change a thing in this poem ..it is straight from the heart and reads just like that!
E.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Aww.. thank you so very much Einstein Noodle! that was very sweet.. And yes I am back.. I write a lot now.. I always love to do that now.. thank you so much for your kind review :) (((Hugs)))

[andrew mitchell]

ain't love grand. nicely expressed and I hope all goes well.:)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

thank you so much Andrew.. I am really glad you liked it.. thank you for your kind words and a review

[Stan Lee]

Awww, too sweet! Very raw. Nice job.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much Andronicus for your review and your very kind words.. :) im glad you liked it!

[Avinash]

A very much in love poem. We just become hopeless in love but that is the only way to do it.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

yes sir.. Thank you so much for your kind review.. I really appreciate it.. I really do!! Thank you again.. May God bless you!!

[wordman]

it came from the heart,whats not to like

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Awww.. thank you word man.. I guess I thought I could've wrote it better.. hahahaha.. thank you for your kind words

[Terrence Chang]

Great poem Tess and well expressed. Hope you and your boyfriend have a everlasting relationship together.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Aww.. thank you so much Terrence but he is now my fiancé.. LOL.. but still thank you

[Terrence Chang]

Congratulation Tess. I hope that you get married soon also.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much.. can I talk to you thru private message??

[Double T]

I love this poem. You have taken this near and dear to your heart and I like it.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so very much Double T.. I am really glad you loved it.. thank you for your kind words