How do you feel?

This poem is for my fiancé Adam.. I love him with all my heart

How do you feel about me?

Do you want me?

Do you want my heart, my love, my soul?

Do you want to hold me and love me?

Do you want to kiss my lips?

Do you just want to lay next to me

So you can feel my body next to yours?

What do you want?

How do you feel?

Tell me!

Because all I feel is love for you.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

T your one of the strongest people i have met and I think this work is the best I have seen in a half a decade. By far next to CP your one of the best writers on this block,

[WittyWonka]

Can't imagine anyone saying no!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Why thank you! Thank you for the review!

[WittyWonka]

You are welcome! :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Nice to meet you

[WittyWonka]

Nice to meet you, too :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

why thank you. you can message me anytime :D

[WittyWonka]

Well, that makes me smile :) Feel free to do the same; my inbox is always open ;)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

okie. Well thank you. I will message you soon. :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I can say only one thing about this one.. Cute :)
okay, a lot more.
i feel the emotions put in to this poem.

i noticed you only have...maybe six pieces published here... I'd like to see more. tons more.

one hundred points for the rating.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

well thank you. I am currently writing a few. I just don't know if I like all of them. I don't feel like I am doing a good job. but I will put them on here that way you can review them and tell me what you like and what you don't OK! I love you so much. And thank you for reviewing all of my works. I love you so very much and it means the world to me. thank you baby bro!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're welcome :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

:)

[Einstein Noodle]

oh those insecurities ... the right amount with the right person makes there fulfillment all the more wonderful ... and they help us not to take one another for granted eh!? i like the font size and color ..is calming ;) i enjoy your very straight talk and that you hit on most everything to be young and in love .. :)
E.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much for your review. and yes young love is grand and fragile. it needs lots of TLC!! thank you for your time to review this! Thank you!

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely expressed poem. One of your very best to me.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

WOW.. Thank you so much for your kind words.. This one came to my heart... thank you again, :)

[Kshitij Gupta]

A good write, this..
Kudos!

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Thank you so much Kshitij.. i try my best when i write, Kudos my friend!!

[Double T]

I like this poem. but could make it a bit less bigger. That would be more helpful. :)

Writing 10/10
Message 9/10

[wordman]

i`m sure he feels the same,sometimes you have to nudge a little

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Yea. I know.. thank you so much Wordman :)

[AaronFreitas]

It's kind of funny when you fall in love yet you still have all these questions and you have insecurities. Our hearts are fragile and it's a scary thing to allow ourselves to love someone and allow someone to carry our heart in their hands. If they choose they can break it at anytime which is why we ask these questions you asked in this write. You are young and no one can really tell you what love is and what you should feel. Open your heart and let love take it's course and let him answer these questions with his love :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Ok.. Thank you so much for putting it that way.. I think that's what im going to do.. Thank you Aaron.. By the way for those of you who don't know.. I am engaged. But I don't even wanna hear your to young thing.. As long as my baby is happy and im happy.. That's all that should matter.. LOL.. Thank you Aaron