In the dark

In the dark

A Poem by Adela Muresan
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As the darkness slowly fell
and our heart's tremble disolved the air
we shared in love's illusion
as fear slowly slept away.

disappointments pierced my heart
like hungry parasites 

now you're gone and i am empty
dating someone else.

but for some moments it was real
more than anything
and for that time i'll just forget
instead if hating you.



 



© 2010 Adela Muresan


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I just LOVE the last four lines, I know it's cliche but I still have to say the masses would be in agreement with me and say that we have all been in this predicamnet.Your words are a great reminder of love and it's many angles.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Adela Muresan
Adela Muresan

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Heya, I'm a 18 year old chick for Romania, studying first year economics in college. I dance while I put my clothes back on the drawer. I like late night net-surfing , reading and reading and read.. more..

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A Poem by Adela Muresan