My F**ked up love triangle

a song for my friend.....his story....i also had the same exp.... u might have too.....

Right now i tell you a story

all those mornings she called me.....

taking my name with her first tea.....

all those evenings scary

she held my hand hugging me.....

said

"don't leave my sight

i am lonely"

yeahhhhh......

now i was a simple boy.....

no hopes , only joy....

you came and i followed

no thoughts of tomorrow

and i used to sing 

"your eyes are my aim

your voice is my truth

baby lets go away.....

to a place with only 

You"

those afternoons, those empty roads

those classes that i could not cope

but watching you i swallowed

oh yeaaahhh.....

now came a day 

when you were happy

so i thought to make it epic

so i told you 

"that i loved you "

from one to oblivion....

you stood there reading me.....

ohh i know

i still remember

those moments

i could not breathe....

you said it's a lieeeeee

it's a dream.....

you left me

you left me

you left me.....

i went home in despair

how could you do that to me.....

and no you call and tell me

it was always him

your destination....

always him

never me

you SAY

"I Feel your pain 

i am sorry"

hahahahaha i laugh and i think

16 out of 24

you used to eat breathe

share with me

called me

for the silliest fears

met me just to discuss 

the breeze

all those pictures you sent me

just to ask me

about the hair curls

if they looked messy

i thought i made you happy

hahahaha

but now i stand on that street alone

where we met

for coffee and cones....

you are crossing the road

holding his hands

sometimes alone

and i look at you for answers

and you

you just smile at me

and ignore

you just smile at me

and ignore.....

Author's Note

no complex vocab, maybe you have read this story a 100 times.....but this is what happened with him....i wanted to write for him....it will flow easily if you'll
read it like a song....
hope you will enjoy....


Asb for DCP

peace!

Reviews

[msharma]

The poem portrays the contours of your mind.keep writing.

[Karabear]

I like how you tell the story :-)

[Asb]

Thanx yeah :)

[Ruth]

Read like a song...could even hear it :) Well thought out and executed xo

[Asb]

Thanx for the lovely thoughts.....xo

[Jayne Disdaine]

I love this it is so honest it hurts x

[Asb]

Hmmm


Appreciate the love.... :)

Thanx for reading

[Matching Socks]

This is very relatable for many, we've all had someone that didn't want us back in the same way.

[Asb]

hmmm correct... :(

[stars are far]

that was so sad, really very sad, escpecially when one of both sides really fall in love and expect to be felt the same about...that was well done

[Asb]

thanks :)
you could feel it....thats all i wanted :)

[stars are far]

always my pleasure