My Darling Broke My Ribs

TRIGGER WARNING. I'm honestly not too sure what this is yet, but I could potentially be triggering or saddening, or maybe you'll just hate it and call me weird

My darling broke my ribs last night,
He ripped them out as I bled
He held them up above me while
I laid and cried in bed.

He shattered my collar bone last week,
And he didn't apologize
I love him so much it's hurting me,
And slowly making me die

My body is betraying me,
It's turning over to his side
It's falling apart around me,
And it hasn't told me why.

Reviews

[Harry Whitehead]

For what it's trying to be, it works incredibly well. It shocked me so there's that. Very raw and horrific. Good job!