What Dank Judgments and Soiled Power

What Dank Judgments and Soiled Power

A Poem by Aella.lives

Currently I’m sitting here thoughtless

But not immune

To changing topics of livid lies

And baleful remedies.

 

Believing all my crass intentions  

Hidden by a ruse

Of simple connotations

And smiles all for pay.

 

“What dank judgments and soiled power”

Said gold to the other falsities

A life not worn by demure fixings

A taut stretch of stench

Hidden by your perfume. 

© 2012 Aella.lives


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Aella.lives
Not sure about this one, please give honest opinions and such.

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solid write


Posted 8 Years Ago


very analytic pessimism here!

Posted 8 Years Ago


word choice is very good, gives a kind of limbo feel to it

Posted 8 Years Ago


wonderfully penned and great word choice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aella.lives

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
I thought it was wonderful, I know many of times I have also sat completely thoughtless. I had no idea what to write of, so I wrote about not writting, and a great idea came to be. I love your vocabulary usage, you are quite intelligent. Wonderful piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aella.lives

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the great review!
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8 Years Ago

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Added on September 16, 2012
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Tags: church, relationships, prostitution, gold, ruse, thoughtless, lies, pay, false, poem, poetry

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Aella.lives
Aella.lives

Bitter Isles, GA



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I write poetry and occasionally short stories as a hobby... I am so completely lost in what I want to do with my life.. But I enjoy what little bit of life I do have... I have a cat named Elvis and .. more..

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