Little Did I Know

Little Did I Know

A Poem by Aerial

No words can express
feelings in distress
focused on the bubbly side
wanting it not to subside
Thinking of the good times we made
thinking of the futuristic wave
clinging to the slightest thread
that weaves our lovers bead


Didn’t know how to keep this burning
feeling that are so overflowing
oblivious of the possessiveness I’ve been
thinking I could keep you till the end


Many sorry should have I said
But I guess I left you bled
wondering how you can save me from drowning
of this love oh so bold and daring...

© 2022 Aerial


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Love can be like that... bold and daring, a little possessive , clinging to a thread that seems to be breaking. You bring up interesting points in this poem, reasons why a love may fail as a result of a possessiveness or just not being able to see the end of the relation. I enjoyed reading and thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Days Ago


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Love can be like that... bold and daring, a little possessive , clinging to a thread that seems to be breaking. You bring up interesting points in this poem, reasons why a love may fail as a result of a possessiveness or just not being able to see the end of the relation. I enjoyed reading and thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 28, 2022
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Tags: crossroads, stuck, wistfull, sadness, feelings

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Aerial
Aerial

Cebu, Philippines



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