Bee & Flower & Sun

Bee & Flower & Sun

A Poem by Aethereal
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A relationship between a flower and a bee.

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Bee & Flower & Sun
 
Touch my pretty petals of desire
little humble bumblebee.
Taste me as you lick my nectar's fire.
Set my inhibitions free.
 
Underneath the rising sun
where we merge from two to one.

© 2013 Aethereal


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This is just s great poem. If flows as smooth as satin.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, blue! Language in itself is a stream of thought. Some streams are rocky, others are smooth.
Romancing nature, succinct piece with so many ways to interpret this one, love 'nectar's fire'.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Frieda P! 'nectar's fire' is a metaphor for an intense emotional involvement.
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Sweet, I love it even more now, my pleasure Aethereal.
Very sensual... On one level, you have the bee and the flower; a relationship which is wrought with sexual tension--the flower opens and gives freely so that that bee may pollinate and propigate the species. Metaphorically, you have the relationship between man and woman...I quite liked this one. I don't know which way that I really want to look at it, as the metaphor, or as described... Creative, unique and very "you". :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed and insightful review, Sarah! Everything in Nature is interrelated in any n.. read more
I like this, romantic and a enchanting view of nature. A very creative poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Tina! Romance is to be found everywhere the little humble bumblebee goes.
Heartfelt write. Very deep and sensible write you've written. It's a very short piece having powerful meaning of it. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Inspiring Writer! To be deep and sensible in as few words as possible is what we all strive .. read more
Nature's love fest, this is absolutely beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Sharon! Such is Nature.
nice work. Please visit me and check my works and leave the comment.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Fahmida! I'll be happy to visit and comment on your works.
Fahmida

8 Years Ago

sure,you did it. Thanks for reading.
Bees and flowers are certainly lovers...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Marie! They are also great metaphors.
Wow it's really exquisite. One of the really beautiful poems i've read on wc. How beautifully it flows, loved the last two lines the most

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

This poem has been building in my mind for weeks, An inspiring first line in one of your poems set t.. read more
Beautiful illustration of this symbiotic relationship. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aethereal

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Rita! This poem was inspired by some of the poems that I've been reading on writerscafe over.. read more

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Added on July 27, 2013
Last Updated on July 27, 2013
Tags: bee, flower, sun, passion, nectar

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