Bee & Flower & Sun

A relationship between a flower and a bee.

Bee & Flower & Sun

 

Touch my pretty petals of desire

little humble bumblebee.

Taste me as you lick my nectar's fire.

Set my inhibitions free.

 

Underneath the rising sun

where we merge from two to one.

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

This is just s great poem. If flows as smooth as satin.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, blue! Language in itself is a stream of thought. Some streams are rocky, others are smooth.

[Frieda P]

Romancing nature, succinct piece with so many ways to interpret this one, love 'nectar's fire'.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Frieda P! 'nectar's fire' is a metaphor for an intense emotional involvement.

[Frieda P]

Sweet, I love it even more now, my pleasure Aethereal.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Very sensual... On one level, you have the bee and the flower; a relationship which is wrought with sexual tension--the flower opens and gives freely so that that bee may pollinate and propigate the species. Metaphorically, you have the relationship between man and woman...I quite liked this one. I don't know which way that I really want to look at it, as the metaphor, or as described... Creative, unique and very "you". :)

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed and insightful review, Sarah! Everything in Nature is interrelated in any number of real and metaphorical ways. Just look at he relationship between the Sun and Moon, Apollo and Selene. Relationship is what defines everything. The relationship among the pieces of a puzzle define that puzzle's global reality.

[Tina Kline]

I like this, romantic and a enchanting view of nature. A very creative poem!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Tina! Romance is to be found everywhere the little humble bumblebee goes.

[Inspiring Writer]

Heartfelt write. Very deep and sensible write you've written. It's a very short piece having powerful meaning of it. Great job!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Inspiring Writer! To be deep and sensible in as few words as possible is what we all strive for.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Nature's love fest, this is absolutely beautiful!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Sharon! Such is Nature.

[Fahmida]

nice work. Please visit me and check my works and leave the comment.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Fahmida! I'll be happy to visit and comment on your works.

[Fahmida]

sure,you did it. Thanks for reading.

[Marie]

Bees and flowers are certainly lovers...

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Marie! They are also great metaphors.

[Zahra]

Wow it's really exquisite. One of the really beautiful poems i've read on wc. How beautifully it flows, loved the last two lines the most

[Aethereal]

This poem has been building in my mind for weeks, An inspiring first line in one of your poems set the stage for this poem's completion.

[Rita L. Sev]

Beautiful illustration of this symbiotic relationship. :)

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Rita! This poem was inspired by some of the poems that I've been reading on writerscafe over the last few weeks.