You

The destruction and recreation on the world

 

For thirty years I cried

And on the thirty first

God’s promise

Was Proved to be a lie,

For every mountaintop and hillside

Was flooded with flowing tears

That fell from my eyes

I gathered up all I knew

And decided to rebuild

The world anew. 2 by 2

I gathered hate and envy

Arrogance and deceit

Lust and laziness

Fear and greed

And a submissive wife

To pair along with me

We repopulated the world, 2 by 2

And out of our incest

We created You and You

Building separate kingdoms

Divided by shifting sands

You and You competed

To build cities more grand

You and You fought.

And You and You died.

But then came their sons.

There names were You (Too)

With each one trying to do

What their fathers failed to

But both were equal

In every single way

And both You (Too’s) died

Died in their father’s name

And so came You Three’s

Who did the same things

After You Three’s, came

The 4s and 5s and 6s

They all killed each other

With the same strong conviction

Eventually all was dead

In the bloodline of the You’s

But then came the rise of

Him, He, Me and Me (Too’s)

They followed the precedent

Left by their predecessors

And invented more ways

To kill each other better

They built more kingdoms

In the expanding sands

And died to claim from each other

More blood soaked lands

They fought and fought and fought

Until none was left alive

The sad story man is

The blessings of a cursed life

A tale told by my father

Passed from Me to You to You

The history of our people

You must now pass on too

Reviews

[Mr. Deft Diction]

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*Raised fist

PgR

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

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"You and You fought.
And You and You died.
But then came their sons.
There names were You (Too)
With each one trying to do
What their fathers failed to
But both were equal
In every single way
And both You (Too's) died
Died in their father's name
And so came You Three's
Who did the same things
After You Three's, came
The 4s and 5s and 6s
They all killed each other
With the same strong conviction
Eventually all was dead
In the bloodline of the You's"

Ridiculous Brandon!