Coming Clean

Some second thoughts for "Too Much," another write I've done.

To lie would be to compromise

And I won't try

I'm done with that

But I don't know what I want anymore

But is it really you

Been hurt too many times to tell

It's sad to say 

That I'd let you take me away 

I'm ashamed 

Is it wrong?

Just try

Open my eyes

Maybe you'll see something in me

I've been too blind to find

Author's Note

Open to critique and comment. Thanks for reading :D

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Deeply meaningful, sad, heartbreaking and moving. Profoundly expressed and felt within.

[Agonizing Clarity]

Wow. Just- this poem speaks entire volumes in such few words. In less than 100 words you communed pain, love, hurt, and sadness- so much sadness. And hope. This is brilliant.

[Secret Thoughts]

I really enjoyed reading this. I know I look at my spouse sometimes and wonder .."what do you see in me?"

[Correspondence]

I appreciate the enjoyment. This was more of an inner toil, torn between two things. More of my stubbornness comes into play.

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Letting someone know that they're capable of finding something in you that you yourself can't find is interesting concept here!!
The actual truth may release when the "someone" find that out...
Great read from you☺

[Correspondence]

Right?? I completely agree. Haha found this writing in one of my journals and said, "why not"

[¿]

And yess you made it a complete conveyed!