Lost in forevers embrace

Lost in forevers embrace

A Poem by Aidz

I alone with the muse can dance forever


Allow me to carry these dreams silently

Wrapped in tears 

Befallen from your jade eyes

 

Thoughts held in my heart

Tenderly caress

Any false hope that appeared lost

 

For all times I carried your pain

Dressed in latin upon a wrist

Kissed on the bliss of a harlequin moon

 

Forgive the Jester as he mocks

Laughter hides his darkness

Buried deep in a fragile mind

 

Dance as only two misjudged can

Lost in their silence

Lost in forevers embrace

© 2013 Adrian AIDZ Giannini

© 2013 Aidz


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This actually touches upon recent emotions I have been experiencing. Then again I may be reading too much into it, but regardless it is a wonderful piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"For all times I carried your pain
Dressed in latin upon a wrist
Kissed on the bliss of a harlequin moon"
Always a pleasure to fall into your words. Good to know the dance of love. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


"dressed in latin upon a wrist"...nice line A. enjoyed buddy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful! I love all your wonderful images and the lead up to the dance. Wonderful write, dear!

Posted 10 Years Ago


'For all times I carried your pain ~ Dressed in latin upon a wrist ~ Kissed on the bliss of a harlequin moon' .. I always feel your writing takes place on another planet, your phrasing is so often told in a different language or painted in unusual colours.

(Not sure what's up with this page.. lots of techno gobbledy gook, posted today 31st May yet has almost 600 reviews.. something's extremely wrong) Such a pity when your words deserve so much more than a mess around them.

Posted 10 Years Ago


For all times I carried your pain
Dressed in latin upon a wrist
Kissed on the bliss of a harlequin moon - my thought was instantly of a tattoo. not sure why. This is a wonderful poem. My muse does not dance, unfortunately but if yours does - keep dancing.
Wonderful poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


This piece makes me dance and laugh at the same time. Quite observant, powerfully so.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You mean you're not going to let me have even one trip around the dance floor with your muse?

For all times I carried your pain
Dressed in latin upon a wrist
Kissed on the bliss of a harlequin moon

Love that verse....

Ha...wow, you have record amount of views here....all those people and not one review! ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow look at all the views WTF WC????

Posted 10 Years Ago



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