Apart

What the f**k is happening?
are we breaking apart?
No, no no!

Your lying she isn't leaving!
we are fixing this all!
our relationship just can't fall!

Sweety i'm sorry i won't let it happen!
it's nearly been a year!
Don't leave we are so near!

i stopped the blood!
i stopped the cuts!
i stopped the thoughts!

all for my girl,
we have to communicate
that's all!

we're finding out what love is,
let's not end it now!
i can't bear to be apart!

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have expressed raw emotions that run deep... breaks the heart..
Pain is a risk we take in love and life. This is a heartfelt write.

[Silver_Anime]

im feeling ur pain in this poem Dx you wrote it very nicely :)
lets hope everything will work out and will get better! ^_^

[MandaBear]

awww well i hope everything works out good for you! its was an awesome poem :)